Dua Karo.... Excellant Ghazal of Badr sb

by suman59 on October 24, 2013, 11:03:58 PM
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duaa karo ki ye paudhaa sadaa haraa hii lage
udaasiyo.n se bhii cheharaa khilaa-khilaa hii lage

ye chaa.Nd taaro.n kaa aa.Nchal usii kaa hissaa hai
ko_ii jo duusaraa o.De to duusaraa hii lage

nahii.n hai mere muqaddar me.n raushanii na sahii
ye khi.Dakii kholo zaraa subah kii havaa hii lage

ajiib shaKhs hai naaraaz hoke ha.nsataa hai
mai.n chaahataa huu.N Khafaa ho to vo Khafaa hii lage

nahii.n hai mere muqaddar me.n raushanii na sahii
ye khi.Dakii kholo zaraa subah kii havaa to lage



-Bashir Badr-
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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2013, 11:56:16 PM »
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duaa karo ki ye paudhaa sadaa haraa hii lage
udaasiyo.n se bhii cheharaa khilaa-khilaa hii lage

ye chaa.Nd taaro.n kaa aa.Nchal usii kaa hissaa hai
ko_ii jo duusaraa o.De to duusaraa hii lage

nahii.n hai mere muqaddar me.n raushanii na sahii
ye khi.Dakii kholo zaraa subah kii havaa hii lage

ajiib shaKhs hai naaraaz hoke ha.nsataa hai
mai.n chaahataa huu.N Khafaa ho to vo Khafaa hii lage

nahii.n hai mere muqaddar me.n raushanii na sahii
ye khi.Dakii kholo zaraa subah kii havaa to lage



-Bashir Badr-


nice sharing,ma'am you have repeated one sher
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«Reply #2 on: October 25, 2013, 12:09:16 AM »
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ooh is it? kafi din hua na yaad nahi raha MB jee. SORRY
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2013, 12:41:28 AM »
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bahut achi Ghazal hai....Nice Sharing..
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«Reply #4 on: October 25, 2013, 12:43:36 AM »
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Welcome back Suman jee, kaafi dinoN baad dikhaai di aap. Khoobsoorat ghazal, nice sharing.
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«Reply #5 on: October 25, 2013, 03:14:58 AM »
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Thanks 4such a beautiful sharing  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: October 25, 2013, 03:43:25 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:nice sharing
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«Reply #7 on: October 25, 2013, 03:52:51 AM »
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duaa karo ki ye paudhaa sadaa haraa hii lage
udaasiyo.n se bhii cheharaa khilaa-khilaa hii lage

ye chaa.Nd taaro.n kaa aa.Nchal usii kaa hissaa hai
ko_ii jo duusaraa o.De to duusaraa hii lage

nahii.n hai mere muqaddar me.n raushanii na sahii
ye khi.Dakii kholo zaraa subah kii havaa hii lage



Bahut Khoob.!!
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«Reply #8 on: October 25, 2013, 08:17:12 AM »
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good
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«Reply #9 on: October 25, 2013, 09:29:40 AM »
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nice, thanx for sharing
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«Reply #10 on: October 25, 2013, 01:35:58 PM »
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thnxxxxx for sharing it suman ji...
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«Reply #11 on: October 25, 2013, 02:05:52 PM »
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ajiib shaKhs hai naaraaz hoke ha.nsataa hai
mai.n chaahataa huu.N Khafaa ho to vo Khafaa hii lage
Bahut Khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: October 25, 2013, 08:24:48 PM »
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thanks for nice sharing - bahot achey thanksss  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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