Ebong tar por

by Nanda Dulal on October 17, 2012, 07:37:24 AM
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Ebong tar por hoytoba ekdin/ Dekha hoye jabe tar sathe/ Sonali sokal bela, rodela dupur/ Othoba mayabee kono rate// Nirjan toru tole/ Jonotar virh thele/ Sagor baluka belay/ Othoba gayer metho pothe// BimUrh takiye robe/ Chopol paliye jabe/ Vejabe chokher pata/ Othoba rakhbe hat hate//
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«Reply #1 on: October 17, 2012, 08:26:19 AM »
It will be better to translate it in English or Hindi so that everyone can understand
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«Reply #2 on: October 17, 2012, 08:44:42 AM »
ham naheeN samjhe
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«Reply #3 on: October 17, 2012, 06:12:37 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  khoob sundor.. daarun... vyaapok likhechhen aapni....khub bhaalo laaglo pore...!!!

TRIED TO TRANSLATE FOR ALL FRIENDS...!!!


Ebong tar por hoytoba ekdin
Dekha hoye jabe tar sathe
Sonali sokal bela, rodela dupur
Othoba mayabee kono rate
Nirjan toru tole
Jonotar virh thele
Sagor baluka belay
Othoba gayer metho pothe
BimUrh takiye robe
Chopol paliye jabe
Vejabe chokher pata
Othoba rakhbe hat hate


aur uske baad yaa shaayad ek din
hogaa milan uske saath
sunehri kisi subah, yaa garam dopahari mein
ya shaayad kisi mayaavi raat mein
sunsaan si jagah
yaa jantaa ki bheed ko dhakelte huye
samundar ke ret pe
yaa gaaon ki meethi raahon pe
dekh rahaa hogaa mujhe wo
(ye line samajh nahi aayaa)
palken gili karke
ya shayad rakhe haath haathon me...
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2012, 05:33:47 AM »
Bimurh takiye robe, chopol paliye jabe = she may keep eye in a fix or may flew away in no time
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«Reply #5 on: October 18, 2012, 11:06:59 AM »
thanks a lot ...!!!

Bimurh takiye robe, chopol paliye jabe = she may keep eye in a fix or may flew away in no time
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«Reply #6 on: October 18, 2012, 11:08:56 AM »
superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb feelings........... and a dream...... thnku kp for translating it for us,,,,,
and isko ek bar meri taraf se bhi padh lena tum.... tongue3
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«Reply #7 on: October 18, 2012, 11:13:40 AM »
aapne bolaa to padh daalaa... jhingaa laalaa... !!!

Thanks a lot for coming back...!!!

superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb feelings........... and a dream...... thnku kp for translating it for us,,,,,
and isko ek bar meri taraf se bhi padh lena tum.... tongue3
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«Reply #8 on: October 18, 2012, 11:17:07 AM »
tum bulao main na aaun aise to haalat nahin ......
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«Reply #9 on: October 18, 2012, 11:22:56 AM »
Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: October 21, 2012, 12:01:42 AM »
Thanks to all and specially  to HRIDAY for translation.
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«Reply #11 on: November 25, 2013, 11:05:24 PM »



Hridoy khula shopa dilam turi chorona,
Hridoy khula shopa dilam turi chorona,
Eccha hole aagla rakhis hridoy gohina
Aoniccha ta chura falis kuno ek dustbina
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«Reply #12 on: November 28, 2013, 12:35:04 AM »
Ebong tar por hoytoba ekdin/
Dekha hoye jabe tar sathe/
Sonali sokal bela, rodela dupur/
Othoba mayabee kono rate//

Nirjan toru tole/
 Jonotar virh thele/
Sagor baluka belay/
Othoba gayer metho pothe//

BimUrh takiye robe/
Chopol paliye jabe/
Vejabe chokher pata/
Othoba rakhbe hat hate//

Written by Dr Nanda Dulal Tikader, Bangladesh
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«Reply #13 on: November 28, 2013, 01:02:00 AM »
Thanks @ nikss

koto ze sagor nodi periye ese
tar chokher govire sheSe dube gelam.
koThin baadhon chhiRe komol baahur DOre
nijeke chirotore shope dilaam..

kopOler kuntol soriye diye
chand mukh du'hater talute niye
du'ThOTe moron khudha jeebone prothom shudha
ni:sheSe shuse nilaam..

saara din puRe gechhe roudre
saara raat vije gechhe shraabone
chOkher paata zei ek korechhi
saara mon vore gechhe swapone.

sukher e ghum theke jagiOna more
valobaasa esechhe gO swapner ghOre
koto aaraadhona kore, shoto saadhonaar pore
tare aaj kachhe ze pelaam..

Written by Dr Nanda Dulal Tikader, Bangladesh

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«Reply #14 on: November 28, 2013, 01:03:03 AM »
Applause Applause
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