Another True Love story

by gum on July 24, 2006, 01:41:26 PM
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Two lovers with passionate love
The boy was the girl's everything
The girl was the boy's angel from above
They are together which makes the angels sings

But couples don't always live happy
They sometimes fight
They sometimes complain
Which can go on all night

But this time, their love went the wrong way
The boy cheated on her
On a very sad, rainy and depressing day
Every time the guy sit next to her, he begins to stir

He finally confess
With his head and pride down
The girl's love for him became less
The girl cried while her voice echos all day around

They broke up and never spoke
Have to be distance
They won't even speak to their folks
They won't even listen

The boy drowns his sadness in his room
The girl drowns her sadness in tears
He cries from morning till noon
Every boy is the girl's fear

She don't want to be hurt no more
The girl is who the boy miss
The girl miss his hugs like before
They both miss each other's kiss

They longed to be together
But they controlled them self
They always thought they would last forever
Love sickness disturb their health

The girl couldn't take this pain in her heart
The boy couldn't bare his life
They both were falling apart
The boy took his life under a knife

He stabs where it hurts
The very center of his breathing
He closes his eyes and is slowly dying
The girl died on the same night

She grabs a rope
Hangs it over the ceiling
She ended her life she couldn't cope
She has ended the pain she was feeling

For them, there was no tomorrow
Their family found them not alive
The two lovers ended their sorrow
The two family's are very sad and wonder why they ended their life

Both of family didn't know how much the two lovers suffer
They didn't know their pain
They didn't know their life became rougher
Living kept the boy and girl driving insane...
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Shikha12
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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2006, 01:47:23 PM »
Sad...Very Sad.... sad5  sad5

But why did the the boy cheated with the girl whom he loved so much that he has to pay with his own life...Huh?? sad5  
Why?? The question remains at it is..??  :?:

Nehow, the end is really tragic.... sad5  :cry:  :cry:
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2006, 01:57:41 PM »
No... U R Wrong....Absolutely wrong..

Not for all, but it may be for some...and it is very unfortunate..
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«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2006, 02:10:56 PM »
Usual Smile  Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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Rishi Soumya
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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2006, 04:51:05 PM »
It is a nice story Gum...par itna dukh kyun hai......
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