!!!!Bring me back to life!!!!:Chit - Chat & General Discussion

urs4evasomdev

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If ur wondering what this thread is about then its pretty simple!!!!
I have a few poems which are very close to my heart and I would like for people on YoIndia to read these and reply to it……. I am dying to know what you think!!!!

But before I start giving you the links to the poems in English Love poetry section I would also like to bring your attention to the forum…………… Critics and Review Only Forum

This has some of my favourite poems…….. Plz do tell me what you think!!! All ur comments and suggestions are gladly accepted!!!

“Immortal Love”

http://www.yoindia.com/forums/1-vt15036.html?start=0

“Bring me back to life”

http://www.yoindia.com/forums/bring-me-back-to-life-vt20486.html

“Once Upon A Time”

http://www.yoindia.com/forums/-once-upon-a-time--vt15643.html

English Love poetry!!!

“Bring me back to life”

This is a new entry into my list!!!

http://www.yoindia.com/forums/bring-me-back-2-life-vt20482.html

“I wish you would care”

There are a few in this, the first being quite a simple one, but the rest of it gets very emotional, a lot of play with words and u would be able to understand what im really like!!!

http://www.yoindia.com/forums/1-vt15307.html?start=0

Through this thread I would also like to encourage people on YoIndia to start writing more on English poetry!!! TRY UR LUCK AS I DID!!!

All my poems are dedicated to Somdev........
Though i have put it out for everyone to speculate on and translate what they understand by it,
Its meaning and worth will in no way be lost for our love is too great for that to happen!!!

Here are the words to the new poem-

Im so tired of being alive,
I cant seem to find the strength to survive,
Suppressed are all my emotional fears,
I still love you, even after so many years,

I was captivated by your resonating life,
I feel bound and caged without ur love by my side,
Sanity has left me, I cant seem to let you go,
I know I cant have you, not so soon or maybe not anymore,

You would always read through me like an open book,
Unfreeze me from the coldness to which I was hooked,
You opened my eyes to everything, you were my sun,
Conjure my spirit again and bid my blood to run

Bring me back to life,
Bind me from harming myself!!!!
Bring me back to life,
Breathe into me!!!!


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roshni246

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«Reply #1 on: September 22, 2006, 07:26:12 PM »

minu relli awesomeeeeeeeeee.....maine sab padi n...ek se ek dil ko chu gayi...i no how much u love my jija...(somdev) and agar tum jaise mohobbat kisine ki ho
to express aise hi hogi...!!! keep writing babe....god bless u...!


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waheed_rose2004

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«Reply #2 on: September 24, 2006, 10:23:47 AM »

really awesome poem Menu............


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urs4evasomdev

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«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2006, 06:07:08 AM »

Quote from: "roshni246"

minu relli awesomeeeeeeeeee.....maine sab padi n...ek se ek dil ko chu gayi...i no how much you love my jija...(somdev) and agar tum jaise mohobbat kisine ki ho
to express aise hi hogi...!!! keep writing babe....god bless you...!

thanx rosh..... dats very sweet of you!


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urs4evasomdev

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«Reply #4 on: September 26, 2006, 06:07:31 AM »

Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"

really awesome poem Menu............

thanx waheed


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Tosha

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«Reply #5 on: February 01, 2007, 12:50:11 PM »

Yeh ... and this month the contest is for love poems in english ... yuhoo!!


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urs4evasomdev

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«Reply #6 on: April 18, 2007, 11:31:51 AM »

oh my.............

aur mujhe to pata hi nahi tha.......... otherwise i wud have been der.............

neway mayb nxt time.............


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«Reply #7 on: April 18, 2007, 04:56:48 PM »

Well, because almost negligible entries.. it was cancelled for some other time.


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«Reply #8 on: April 18, 2007, 05:45:49 PM »

Awesome meenu,verry nice.
Nice 2 c ya,hope so u r doing well in ur life :D .


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Nirbhay

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«Reply #9 on: April 19, 2007, 05:22:08 AM »

Marvellous Minu, very well written all..

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"

Awesome meenu,verry nice.
Nice 2 c ya,hope so u r doing well in ur life :D .

O jee koi hamari bhi khabrein shabrein le liya karo..


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*DeSi KuRi WaLaIti sTyLe*

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«Reply #10 on: April 23, 2007, 02:38:28 AM »

*****LO SUNN LO*****


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*DeSi KuRi WaLaIti sTyLe*

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«Reply #11 on: April 23, 2007, 02:39:39 AM »

AAP KI KHABAR SHABAR LENE KE ALAWA AUR BHI BOHAT KAAM HAI,,,,,,,,


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