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«Reply #15 on: June 23, 2008, 07:03:21 PM »
Aapne mere mann ki baat peh di Pooja, jo shayad main express nahin kar paayi thi.
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«Reply #16 on: June 23, 2008, 07:19:55 PM »
pooja ji, talat ji....
maine ye post kisi bhi tarah se pita kee koi perticular image banane ke liye nahi kee hai aur na hi mai ye kah raha hun kee sabhi pita aise hi hote hain....jaisa ki post me likha hai......
ye pita ke baare me apne apne alag alag anubhav ho sakte hain.....
Prince wale thread me sonia aur natural ki kuch baaten hui thi...
bas sirf issiliye maine ye post kee.....
pooja ji kahti hain ki unhone alag alag type ke pitaon ko alag alag vyvahaar karte dekha hai..I agreed....
maine bhi alag alag maa ko isi tarah dekha hai...
to kya usase maa ki mamta ke baare me likhe gaye aur mahsoos kiye gaye sab anubhav jhooth to nahi ban jaate.......
ek pita ke us pahloo ko jo kabhi logon ke saamne nahi aata...maine chune ki koshish kee hai......
ek pita ka dil bhi mamta se bhara hota hai ...lekin wo kabhi maa ki mamta jaisi misaal nahi ban pata.....
pata nahi aapke sath hua hai ya nahi lekin maine mahsoos kiya hai jab koi atpati si baat manwani ho to maa kahti hai chalo thik hai mai tere papa ko mana lungi.........
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«Reply #17 on: June 23, 2008, 07:29:22 PM »
mera life exp. hai yah.. kisi ki bhawnao ko thase lage to main dil se maafi chahti hu..

Father bahoot majboot hote hue bhi ek seema tak bacho ki responsibilities uthate hai.. aor kahin per jakar agar unke vichar bacho se na mile to rishta tak torr jaate hai.. palat kar nahi dekhtein

Jahan Ma kabhi aise nahi kar paati.. bache maane ya na maane.. roti, marati, dant.ti, samjhaati,bacho se sunati, pati se chip kar hamesha bacho ke sath rahti hai..

bacho ke pass hamesha ek sahara ek vishwaas hota hai ki ma kuch kar sake ya na kar sake.. magar sath hai...


Sorry subah jab apki post pardi tabhi yah baat man mai aai thi aor shayad issi wajah se maine kuch na likhne ki sochi thi magar... ruka nahi gaya!!
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«Reply #18 on: June 23, 2008, 07:40:59 PM »
pata nahi aapke sath hua hai ya nahi lekin maine mahsoos kiya hai jab koi atpati si baat manwani ho to maa kahti hai chalo thik hai mai tere papa ko mana lungi.........


yah bhi baat baat per depend karta hai Bekarar ji,

Kuch baatein aise hoti hai jo ma se kah kar Pita se manwaai jaati hai aor kuch aise jo Pita ko kah kar Ma se manwaai jaati hai..

magar jayadatar.. Ma se kah kar pita se hi manwaai jaati hai!!


her manushaye ke jeevan mai do baatein bahoot gahra asar karti hai.. us main achi bhawnaao ka hona aor apne kartvaye ka palan karna!!

Sdio se Ma apni bhawnaao se apne bacho ke komal man ko jeevit rakhati hai.. choti se choti baat ka khayal rakhate hue apne bacho ko bhawanaye samjhne layak banati hai.. wahin per Pita bacho ko kathor anushasan mai rakh kar unhe dunia dari aor unke kartvayo ka palan karna sikhata hai.. kaise bhi ardchan kyun na aaye.. agge badna sikhate hai

MA-BAAP dono bache ke sabse pahle teachar hote hai!! issi liye Pita ki tasveer aor MA ki tasveer mai jameen asmaan ka antar paaya jaata hai!!

Ab main wapis phir ajj ke zamane ki baat per atti hu: Ajj na jaane kitane single parents hai jo akele bacho ko paal rahe hai.. chahe wo father hai ya Mother

jayadtar kanoon bhi divorce mai bache Ma ko deta hai Pita ko nahi.. Kyun ki bacho ki growth ke liye unko life mai emotions ka rahna bahoot jaroori hai jo ki Pita ke pass kam paaye jaate hai!! kahin per jakar Pita apni life ke baare mai bhi sochta hai .. jahan shayd koi he ma hogi jo bacho se pahle apni zindagi ka sochein!!

Ajj na to Pita ki wo purani chavi hai na hi ma ki.. sab insaani nature per jakar khatam ho jaata hai aor bache apni najar se apne ma-baap ki chavi unki nature ke hisaab se banate hai!!

Again, agar meri kisi baat se kisi ka bhi dil dukha ho to main maafi chahti hu!!
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«Reply #19 on: June 23, 2008, 07:43:58 PM »
isme thes pahuchane wali koi baat nahi hai.....lekin bas itna hi kah sakta hun kee ho sakta hai ye apne apne anubhav kee baat ho..lekin sirf kuch baaton ko lekar aap pita ke indirect balidaano ko andekha nahi kar sakte..nahi karna chahiye
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«Reply #20 on: June 23, 2008, 07:51:19 PM »
Apne bilkul sahi kaha, khud ko kathor rakh kar apne bacho ko duniadaari sikhlana asaan kaam nahi hai!!
Apki is baat se sehamat hu main.. maine kai aise father dekhein hai jin hone Ma ke na hone per bacho ko apni sari zindagi de di.. magar shayd ek ya do hi aise father najar ayye..

magar maine aise hazaro MA dekhin hai jinke pati ke jaane baad, unhone apni sari zindagi bacho ko de di..

agar app ratio dekhein to bahoot kam ache father najar atte hai... (sorry to say this)

ek chota sa example deti hu.. yah shayd ghar ghar ki kahani hai:

Jab bacha chota hota hai, sham ko pita ghar atta hai aor bacha so raha hota hai. Ma ke lakh mana karne per bhi Pita bache ko utha deta hai.. pyar main, kyun ki sara din bache ko miss kiya hota hai, wo uske sath khailna chahta hai.. bacha uth kar agar khushi se khailta hai to Pita usse rakhta hai pass aor khailta hai..

magar kahin agar bacha rota rahe aor chup na ho to wo Ma ko pakda deta hai.. lo chup karao isse.. Aor ma tab tak bache ke sath lagi rahti hai jab tak wo behal nahi jaata chup nahi ho jaata!!


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«Reply #21 on: June 23, 2008, 08:01:58 PM »
Jab bacha chota hota hai, sham ko pita ghar atta hai aor bacha so raha hota hai. Ma ke lakh mana karne per bhi Pita bache ko utha deta hai.. pyar main, kyun ki sara din bache ko miss kiya hota hai, wo uske sath khailna chahta hai.. bacha uth kar agar khushi se khailta hai to Pita usse rakhta hai pass aor khailta hai..

magar kahin agar bacha rota rahe aor chup na ho to wo Ma ko pakda deta hai.. lo chup karao isse.. Aor ma tab tak bache ke sath lagi rahti hai jab tak wo behal nahi jaata chup nahi ho jaata!!


bikul sahi kaha aapne mere aur prince ke saath bhi aisa hota hai.....vaise to prince hamesha hanste hue hi jagta hai..lekin maine note kiya hai ki wo sirf tabhi maa ko dhundhta hai jab
1. use neend aa rahi ho aur wo sona chahta ho
2. use su-su ya poti karni ho
3. uski tabiyat thik na ho...
ye pata nahi ishwar kee den hai ya fir maa kee anokhi chavi ka kamaal....halanki ye bhi ek karishma hi hai ke prince ke aane ke bad mai jyada samay uske sath nahi bita paaya lekin fir bhi wo mujhe pahchan leta hai chahe hum do mahine baad mile aur fir mere saath hi rahna pasand karta hai.....
lekin upar bataye gaye kisi bhi karan me wo sirf maa ko hi dhundhta hai ......to bechara pita kya kare
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«Reply #22 on: June 23, 2008, 08:10:27 PM »
bikul sahi kaha aapne mere aur prince ke saath bhi aisa hota hai.....vaise to prince hamesha hanste hue hi jagta hai..lekin maine note kiya hai ki wo sirf tabhi maa ko dhundhta hai jab
1. use neend aa rahi ho aur wo sona chahta ho
2. use su-su ya poti karni ho
3. uski tabiyat thik na ho...
ye pata nahi ishwar kee den hai ya fir maa kee anokhi chavi ka kamaal....halanki ye bhi ek karishma hi hai ke prince ke aane ke bad mai jyada samay uske sath nahi bita paaya lekin fir bhi wo mujhe pahchan leta hai chahe hum do mahine baad mile aur fir mere saath hi rahna pasand karta hai.....
lekin upar bataye gaye kisi bhi karan me wo sirf maa ko hi dhundhta hai ......to bechara pita kya kare

Kyun ki Bekarar ji Ma ne chahe bache ko mahine se na dekha ho wo kabhi bhi sote hue bache ko nahi uthayegi... balki chup rahegi ki kahin sota bacha uski awaz sun kar he na uth jaaye!

Pita apne pyar mai sawarthi hokar sote bache ko utha deta hai aor Ma apni mamta main bache ki nind ko apni bhawnao se jayada Imp. manati hai.

Issi liye Ma ka rishta Mamtamai aor Pita ka sawarth ka rishta maana gaya hai!!

Hope mai jo kahna chah rahi thi wo appis example se samjh gaye hoge!!
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«Reply #23 on: June 23, 2008, 08:23:38 PM »
ek raja tha ek raani aur ek nanha rajkumar.....raja chahe kitna bhi vyast ho raat ka khana humesha rajkumar ke saath hi khata tha..aur rani dono ko sath baitha kar garma-garam khana khilati thi..aur anandit hoti thi......ek din raja ko bahoot bhookh lagi thi wo khane ki table par baith kar rajkumar ka intzar kar rahe the ..aur rajkumar apne hi kisi khel me magan tha.....
akhiekaar raja ne jor se awaz lagai kumar aao khana kha lo ..char panch baar awaz lagane ke baad bhi jab rajkumar khane ke liye nahi aaya tab raja ne rani se awaz lagane ko kaha...
rani ne awaz lagai aur rajkumar turant khel chod-kar khane ke liye aa gaya....
raja ne rani se pucha maine itni aawazen dee ye nahi aaya aur tumne ek hi awaz lagai ye turant aa gaya kaise?
raani ne kaha aap ise awaz de rahe the kyonki aapko khane me der ho rahi thi is karan aapki awaz me swarth tha....jabki maine ise awaz di sirf ise khilane ke maksad se aur usne turant suna.

lekin fir bhi pita ki bhawnaon ko bhi samjha jaye
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«Reply #24 on: June 23, 2008, 08:33:00 PM »
so sweet Bekarar ji!!

Pita ke pyar se kabhi bhi inkaar nahi hai!! Magar kisi bhi haal mai uski Tulna Ma ke pyar se nahi ki ja sakti!!!
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