**Shabdon ka khel aur sahi mel** RH

by Rajesh Harish on January 15, 2009, 06:26:27 PM
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Rajesh Harish
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Well seeing the standard of errors made by some yoindians, I agree with Ghayel Ji as he has mentioned in one of the threads. We much understand that even though we are using English script (alphabets) we must separate words as they are used if they are in Hindi.

Galat jagha par agar hota hai shabdon ka mel
Toh bigadh jaati hai ek achchhe shayar ka khel

Waise galti  to sabhi se ho hi jaati hai
Par un ka na sudhar karna bhi galti hai

Galti ko chupana to hai unka larakpan
Jo maane aur sudhare to hai barappan
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #1 on: January 15, 2009, 07:04:14 PM »
wah rajesh, bahut sahi kaha hai aap neh... i totally agree with you and ghayel

jasbir singh
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #2 on: January 15, 2009, 07:28:24 PM »
Thanks for your support Jasbir Ji
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #3 on: January 15, 2009, 07:30:46 PM »
Thanks for your support Jasbir Ji

wELCOME RAJESH, you have started a very intersting and important thread... so cheers to you dear.

Jasbir Singh
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: January 15, 2009, 07:34:49 PM »
Thanks again Jasbir Ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: January 24, 2009, 07:01:42 AM »
Still have seen errors on threads posted
It would be better to self correct
Use of capital letters for name beginning is important
This is what I feel. What you feel is upon you. Comment if you wish Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh?Huh??//
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2009, 09:07:44 PM »
Hi Everybody,

Still after so many months I have noted that most of the
new comers to Yoindia as well as some senior members are
not separating the words properly.This makes it difficult
to read easily. e.g. 'humse' should be written as 'hum se' ;
 humse  hum se    'jisko' - 'jis ko'     jisko   jis  ko             .
Well I have given a hint but all depends on the individual
and how they take my advice.          
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #7 on: March 15, 2010, 10:46:59 PM »
Aaj bhi main dekh raha hoon shabdon ka mel
Thoda hua hai sudhaar purane logon mein
Naye logon ko maarg darshan ki jaroorat hai
Purane logon ki lekhni se seekh sakte hain
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #8 on: March 16, 2010, 04:14:46 AM »
I agree with you Rajesh ji,bahut sahi kaha aapne. Thumbs UP
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