SHIV KUMAR BATALVI -Panna 4:Chit - Chat & General Discussion

Rajbir

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«Reply #45 on: February 07, 2006, 08:47:51 AM »

Ranjeet

Once again great job done brother !

To be honest i haven't read Loona myself, but now i feel like getting a copy of it.

Rajbir


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ranjeet_rp

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SHIV KUMAR BATALVI

«Reply #46 on: February 07, 2006, 08:52:09 AM »

THANX FOR ENCOUREGEMENT,I WILL POST TWO VERY IMPORTENT AND MUST READ LINES FROM LOONA IN MY NEXT VISIT.


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ranjeet_rp

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«Reply #47 on: February 08, 2006, 10:15:21 AM »

these are my favourate lines from the loona.in these lines loona tells ira(her friend)that she is in love with pooran (son of her husbend salwaan)which is of her age and ira warn loona that if she will tell her feelings to pooran she will be called charachterless by the socity.loona answered.....

loona

ira
toone bhi sach sunaya
toone bhi loona ke jakhmon par
matt(advise)ka bas namak hai lagaya
tujhe bhi kuch samajh naa aaya
dharmi babul(father) ne paap kamaya
mere saath bandh diyaa phool murjhaya
jiska ichhraan(first wife of salwaan)ne roop bitaya(use kiya)
main pooran ki maan(mother)
pooran ke saath ki(hamumar)
main usse hoon kuch bari
par main kaise maan uski lagi
woh meri garbh joon nahin aaya
sakhi ree main beti jaisi
salwaan ki

pita agar beti kaa roop bitaaye(use kare)
to logon ko laaj naa aae
agar loona puran ko chahe
charitraheen kyon kahe
jeebh jahan ki

charitraheen to tab koi kahe
agar loona beche apni hansi
par agar saath naa dhoonde mat-pita
saath dhoondhne main baat kyaa hai
apmaan ki

loonaa ho tab apraadhi
agar ander se ho suhaagan
mahak uski par ho koi daag
mahak meri to kanjak(kunwari)
mai hi jaanti


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Rajbir

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«Reply #48 on: February 08, 2006, 10:24:53 AM »

Bahut khoob Ranjeet !

I was eagerly waiting for your post !

Rajbir


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ranjeet_rp

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«Reply #49 on: February 08, 2006, 10:33:26 AM »

thanx rajbir,
us post main loonaa ne socity ke munh par kheench kar thappar maara hai jo pitaa jaise mard ko to charitraheen nahin kahti jo beti ke saath umra bitaae par us aurat ko charitraheen kahti hai jo apne liye apnaa saath dhhondhti hai aur is kaare par socity ko sharam nahin aati

in words of shiv kumaar........

SALWAAN AAJ BHI KHATM NAHIN HUWE,LOONA AAJ BHI NIRDOSH NAHIN SAMJHI JAATI,SIRF NAAM AUR DINON KAA FARQ PAR GAYA HAI.


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Naya_Daur

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SHIV KUMAR BATALVI

«Reply #50 on: February 10, 2006, 11:51:45 AM »

Tennu diyaan hanjuaan da bhaadda,
Ni peeddaan da paraaga bhunn de
Bhatti vaaliye.

Bhatti vaaliye chambe diye daaliye
Ni dukhaan da paraaga bhunn de.
Bhatti vaaliye.

Ho geya kuvela menu
Dhall gaiyaan chhaavaan ni,
Beliyaan chon mudd aiyaan
Majjhiyaan te gaavaan ni.

Paaya chiddiyaan ne cheek- chihaadda
Ni peeddaan da paraaga bhunn de
Bhatti vaaliye.

Tennu diyaan hanjuaan da bhaadda,
Ni dukhaan da paraaga bhunn de
Bhatti vaaliye.

Chhaiti chhaiti kareen;
Maen te jaana baddi duur ni,
Jithe mere haaniyaan da
Ttur gaya puur ni.

Os pind da suneende raah maadda
Ni peedaan da paraaga bhunn de
Bhatti vaaliye.

Tennu diyaan hanjuaan da bhaadda,
Ni dukhaan da paraaga bhunn de
Bhatti vaaliye.

Meri vaari pateyaan di
Pandd silli ho gayi.
Mitti di kadhai teri
Kaahnu pilli ho gayi

Tere saek nu ki vajjeya dugaadda
Ni peedaan da paraaga bhunn de
Bhatti vaaliye.

Tennu diyaan hanjuaan da bhaadda,
Ni dukhaan da paraaga bhunn de
Bhatti vaaliye.

Lapp ku eh chung meri
Mennu pehlaan tor ni,
Kacch kacche rakh na ni,
Roadd thodde hor ni

Karaan minnataan muka de ni puaadda
Ni peedaan da paraaga bhunn de
Bhatti vaaliye.

Tennu diyaan hanjuaan da bhaadda,
Ni dukhaan da paraaga bhunn de
Bhatti vaaliye.

So gaiyaan havaavaan ro ro
Kar varlaap ni,
Taareyaan nu chadd gaya
Mitthaa mittha taap ni.

Janj saahvaan di da rus gaya laadda
Ni peedaan da paraaga bhunn de
Bhatti vaaliye.

Tennu diyaan hanjuaan da bhaadda,
Ni dukhaan da paraaga bhunn de
Bhatti vaaliye

--SHIV KUMAR BATLAVI sung by Hans Raj Hans

to get this song click here


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Pooja

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«Reply #51 on: February 12, 2006, 05:58:09 AM »

wah ranjeet ji kaya yaaad dila diya!!

loona play maine shayad 36 times se bhi jayada baar perform kiya hai...asal mai wahin se shiv batalvi ji ka pata chala kayun ki is play mai sare song inhi ke hai....by the way maine loona ka role kiya tha Usual Smile

Such a nice story...


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nirbhay

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«Reply #52 on: February 12, 2006, 06:23:53 AM »

wow ye gaana bahut mashakat karne ke baad suna bhai JEET acha laga..................thnc

Wow pooja JiJi ....... amazing..... !!


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Naya_Daur

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SHIV KUMAR BATALVI

«Reply #53 on: February 12, 2006, 09:35:47 AM »

kya baat hai pooja ji,,agar aap ke pass shiv kumar ji ke songs hain toh plz upload kar dijiye ja phir email kar dijiye,,plzzzzzz,,, my email is
jeet.junction@yahoo.com

aur nirbhay bhai,, i am sure,, is song ko sun.ne ke baad ,,app ko apni ki gayi mushakat bhut mamooli lagi hogi,,

mujhe lagta hai agar kissi ko is song to best way mein sun.na ho toh raat ko saune se pehle ek dum aaram se ,,with closed eyes,, sun.na chahiye,,main toh aise hi karta hoon

Thnks 4 responding!!!


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Naya_Daur

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«Reply #54 on: February 12, 2006, 05:11:06 PM »

ISHTEHAAR

Ik kuddi jida naa muhabbat,
Goum hai.
Saad muraadi, soni phabbat,
Goum hai.

Soorat ousdi pariyaan vargi
Seerat di o mariam lagdi
Hasdi hai taa phul jhaddade ne
Turdi hai taa gazal hai lagdi.
Lamm-salammi, saru de kad di
Umar aje hai marke agg di,
Par naina di gal samajhdi.
Goummeyaan janam janam han hoye
Par lagda jyon kal di gal hai.
Yun lagda jyon ajj di gal hai,
Yun lagda jyon hun di gal hai.

Huney taan mere kol khaddi si
Huney taan mere kol nahi hai
Eh ki chhal hai, eh ki phatkan
Soch meri hairan baddi hai.
Nazar meri har aande jaande
Chehre da rang phol rahi hai,
Ous kuddi nu tol rahi hai.

Saanjh dhale baazaaran de jad,
Moddaan te khushbu ugdi hai.
Vehal, thakaavat, bechaini jad,
Chau raaheyaan te aa juddadi hai.
Rauley lippi tanhai vich
Os kuddi di thudd khaandi hai.
Os kuddi di thudd disdi hai.
Har chhin mennu inyon lagda hai,
Har din mennu inyon lagda hai.
Judde jashan ne bheeddaan vichon,
Juddi mahak de jhurmat vichon,
O mennu aawaaz davegi,
Men ohnu pehchaan lavaanga
O mennu pehchaan lavegi.
Par es raule de hadd vichon
Koi mennu aawaaz na denda
Koi vi mere vall na vehnda.

Par khaure kyun tapala lagda,
Par khaure kyun jhaulla painda,
Har din har ik bheedd juddi chon,
But ohda jyun langh ke jaanda.
Par mennu hi nazar na aunda.
Goum gaya maen os kuddi de
Chehre de vich goummeya rehnda,
Os de gham vich ghullda rehnda,
Os de gham vich khurda jaanda!
Os kuddi nu meri saun hai,
Os kuddi nu apni saun hai,

Os kuddi nu sab di saun hai.
Os kuddi nu jag di saun hai,
Os kuddi nu rab di saun hai,
Je kithe paddhdi sundi hove,
Jyundi ya o mar rahi hove
Ik vaari aa ke mil jaave
Vafa meri nu daag na laave
Nahin taan methon jiya na jaanda
Geet koi likheya na janda!

Ik kudi jida naa muhabat.
Goum hai.
Saad muradi sohni phabbat
Goum hai.

* the link to this poem recorded in SHIV KUMAR's own voice will be shortly provided,BE READY WITH YOUR REAL PLAYER


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Naya_Daur

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«Reply #55 on: February 13, 2006, 09:57:20 AM »

CLICK HERE to hear the above poem in Shiv Kumar's own voice

* Shiv Kumar is recognised as a good poet not singer


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Rajbir

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SHIV KUMAR BATALVI

«Reply #56 on: February 13, 2006, 10:24:26 AM »

Jeet

Fantastic !

I just listened to the poem in Shiv Batalvi's own voice from the link you provided.

Thanks brother for sharing the master's creation in his own voice.

I am thrilled...

Rajbir


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Naya_Daur

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«Reply #57 on: February 13, 2006, 10:48:21 AM »

Thanks RAJBIR!

I got many ,n will provide links here very shortly


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Naya_Daur

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SHIV KUMAR BATALVI

«Reply #58 on: February 15, 2006, 07:16:11 AM »

Quote from: "Rajbir"

mainu tera shabaab lai baitha,
rang gora gulaab lai baitha.

dil da dar si kitay na lai baithay,
lai hi baitha janaab lai baitha.

vehal jad vi mili hai farazan ton,
taray mukh di kitaab lai baitha.

kini beeti tay kini baaki hai,
manoo eho hisaab lai baitha.

mainoo jad vi tusi ho yaad aay,
din dihaaray sharaab lai baitha.

shiv nu ik gam tay hi bharosa si,
gam ton koraa jawaab lai baitha

mainu tera shabaab ...........

(by Shiv Kumar Batalvi)

This poem is sung by Mohinder Kapoor
to listen
Click here


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Naya_Daur

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«Reply #59 on: February 15, 2006, 07:26:55 AM »

Jaach mennu aa gayi gham khaan di
Hauli hauli ro ke ji parchaun di.

Changa hoiya tu paraaya ho giyoun
Mukk gayi chinta tennu apnaan di.

Mar te jaan, par ddar hai damma vaaleyo,
Dharat vi vikdi hai mul shamshaan di.

Na deyo mennu saah udhaare dosto,
Lae ke mudd himmat naheen partaan di .

Na karo ‘Shiv’ di udaasi da ilaaj,
Roun di marzi hai ajj baimaan di.

to listen this poem in chitra's voice
click here


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