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Mashhur Shayar

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http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/yeh-faasle-t56322.0.html;msg1038359;topicseen#new


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Pallavi Gupta

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Re: Someone is hurt... ..

«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2010, 06:23:12 AM »

hello NEEL JI............i visited on the link......n after reading all i think its not a big issue bcoz of which u leave the yoindia......u r a good poet n all such stuff on that link is shows that this is war between them.......de r not give comment on peom while de give comment on each other........

so dont take it so seriously........i had also read ur poem n it ws fantastic......mujhe koi kami nazar nai aayi....so KEEP SMILING n KEEP WRITING.....

happy9


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Re: Someone is hurt... ..

«Reply #2 on: May 25, 2010, 12:24:58 PM »

Thanx a lot Pallavi ji... ab to humein unke wapasi ka intzaar hai...!!!


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Badal85

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Re: Someone is hurt... ..

«Reply #3 on: May 25, 2010, 03:12:06 PM »

i also did not see any fault in the writing...joa likha hain woa dil sey likha hain....aur jisney dil se padha woa unnhey samaj sakey...aur kya chahyey.... main toa kehta hu..ki agar unko acchi nahi lagi toa tumhara kya kasoor...tumney unkey liye nahi likhi hain tumney aapney aap key liyey likha hain...bas dont listen to anyone else.


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neelgold

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Re: Someone is hurt... ..

«Reply #4 on: May 25, 2010, 11:21:36 PM »

Pallvi Thanks for ur concern...
Its perfectly fine... i have no hard feelings for anyone.. God bless them ......

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Quote from: Pallavi Gupta on May 25, 2010, 06:23:12 AM


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neelgold

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Re: Someone is hurt... ..

«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2010, 11:22:58 PM »

Kapil Yaar thanks a lot.........
bt iski koi jarorat nahi thi .........

Tons of thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
God bless u & be happy alwyz.................

Quote from: klaskar on May 25, 2010, 12:24:58 PM

Thanx a lot Pallavi ji... ab to humein unke wapasi ka intzaar hai...!!!


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neelgold

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Re: Someone is hurt... ..

«Reply #6 on: May 25, 2010, 11:27:04 PM »

Badal ji aapne sahi pakda maine kissi ke nahi likha i jst write for myself only.........& i alwyz mention that ki im jst trying im nt a writer / poet . i dont know anything abt poetry dese r jst feelings pure feelings jisse hum kabhi bol nahi sakte salo se ander hai ......bttr hai ki ander hi rehe ..........abb to aisa lagta hai .........

i jst strt writing yehi pe aah ke issi syt pe .......shyd logon ko pasand nhi aya kyon kissi ko dukhi karian ...
so bttr to keep qiet..........

Thnx a lottttttttttttttttttt

Quote from: Badal85 on May 25, 2010, 03:12:06 PM


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Re: Someone is hurt... ..

«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2010, 11:30:35 PM »

Kuch yaad aaaya Neel ji isko padh ke........ Huh?

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http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayriedard/dil-aur-kalam-t55204.0.html;msg1020879#msg1020879


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neelgold

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Re: Someone is hurt... ..

«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2010, 11:40:17 PM »

Bhut kuch & u knoe it very well I am lyk tht .......
Bt let thm be happy khush hone do unne yaar .......

Quote from: klaskar on May 25, 2010, 11:30:35 PM

Kuch yaad aaaya Neel ji isko padh ke........ Huh?

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http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayriedard/dil-aur-kalam-t55204.0.html;msg1020879#msg1020879


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