-Specially New Users – Please Comment-

by HumTum on January 29, 2009, 03:14:32 PM
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Hello All,

I just would like to see your comments positive/negative.

So, do you feel de-motivated when some one (usually senior members) make negative comments on your poems BUT in very friendly way and also show you how, that particular poem in question, might look even better after some modification(s)? Say for example:-

You have written a sher:-

Kyu kudh ko akela mehsuus karta hai aadmi
Jab ke iss duniya mein aadmi hi bahut hai...

Then some one comes to your post and say:-

Hello xxx, this is really nice thoughts. I really like it but somehow I feel that if you just modify few words in it will look even better. So please see below my views and let me know your views on that:-

Phir kyun TanhayiooN ka shikar hai har shakhs
Ke jab ke iss Duniiyaa mein insaaN hai bahut..


So, my question is – would you feel de-motivated or motivated?

waiting for your comments. 




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