:: Untitled - Notepad ::

by myheart_ursonly on December 31, 2004, 10:59:15 AM
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«Reply #150 on: January 08, 2005, 08:08:54 AM »
Quote from: "smile_deep1"
its seriously a nice work....................

for ur miss her.................. heart ji

kal raat aap mere bahut kareeb thai,
mano har cheez main aap shareek thai,
hawai bhi aapka sparsh karti thi,
mano to unme bhi aapki khushbu atti thi,
chand bhi aapka chehra darshata tha,
taron ka samuh jud kar aapka chehra ban jata tha.
kya kahey aap sab nazaron se bad kar hain,
haan aap is hazaron se bad kar hain...


beautiful wrk!!!

n thnx deep n nidhi  Usual Smile
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«Reply #151 on: January 08, 2005, 08:14:52 AM »
beautiful deep.
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«Reply #152 on: January 08, 2005, 08:19:28 AM »
thanks heart and nidhi..............................
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«Reply #153 on: January 08, 2005, 08:22:24 AM »
aaaaaahhhhhhhaa

ab ye bhi bata do deep kahan se maara  Usual Smile

lol.... me kidding only.... ok? khafa naa hona  :wink:
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«Reply #154 on: January 08, 2005, 08:26:58 AM »
well words mere hain............. per khayal aapke dil se mara janab................. jara dekho wahin hain na?
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«Reply #155 on: January 08, 2005, 08:30:01 AM »
ohho!

beautiful words deep! especially if this is for her... :oops:
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #156 on: January 08, 2005, 08:34:49 AM »
well yeh mere mr ke liye bhi hain.............
per is wakt apke miss ke liye aapke ehsaas hain...
per meri awaaz hain...
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«Reply #157 on: January 08, 2005, 08:36:35 AM »
sab mr. ke liye hi... kuch mere liye bhi likha karo kabhi Puzzled !
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«Reply #158 on: January 08, 2005, 08:40:02 AM »
tumnay kya likha mere liye.................
main sab ke liye nahin likhti................. samjhay
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«Reply #159 on: January 08, 2005, 08:41:49 AM »
:sad:
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«Reply #160 on: January 08, 2005, 08:42:27 AM »
so rude

:cry: :cry: :cry:
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«Reply #161 on: January 08, 2005, 08:45:07 AM »
really?...................... i said na mujhay tameez se baat karna nahin atta............. bhool gaye......... lolz
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«Reply #162 on: January 08, 2005, 08:46:58 AM »
katti :cry:
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #163 on: January 08, 2005, 08:52:02 AM »
uff......... yeh ladka..........
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #164 on: January 08, 2005, 08:54:46 AM »
this is my serious tone

:cry:
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