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by myheart_ursonly on December 31, 2004, 10:59:15 AM
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smile_deep1
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«Reply #165 on: January 08, 2005, 08:58:08 AM »
ok ok tumhare liye bhi likh dungy................. ok
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #166 on: January 08, 2005, 09:02:04 AM »
ahesaan kar rahi hai kya Puzzled !
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«Reply #167 on: January 08, 2005, 09:04:29 AM »
ufffffffffff..................
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«Reply #168 on: January 08, 2005, 10:22:11 AM »
:dance:
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«Reply #169 on: January 08, 2005, 11:02:23 AM »
Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
portrait of ............ ("-") sorry cant put her name here ("-")
for miss pretty eyes who has just entered my life...


"memories"
A bit scared, i touched the brush,
and it started crying itself out on paper.
Crying and drawing portrait of her,
pouring out my heart it started dancing.
Looking above, at the rainbow in the sky,
picking the most vibrant colors,
it started drawing.
Like magic, unexplainable,
it poured my memories.
Now it was complete. I had a look at it.
Each shape was speaking her grace.
I kept staring at it, loosing myself.
Its splendour started hypnotising me.
I wanted to feel nothing,
still, my eyes went out on paper,
and the colors mixed up themselves,
started running down.
I closed my eyes, trying to memorise her face,
trying to hold myself still.
My tears still fell off, one by one.

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aww such a sweet poem heart!  :D

kaha tak sambalon mai apne dil ko,
khayalo me tu hi tu bas aati hai,
kaha tak sametoon mai apni nazar ko,
charon taraf tu hi tu nazar ati hai! (NM)
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«Reply #170 on: January 08, 2005, 11:08:16 AM »
good 1..deep...

heart ...hajmola khao.....hehehehe
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«Reply #171 on: January 08, 2005, 05:16:03 PM »
lolzzzzz nikki;bechare ko kaun si hajmola khila rahi ho?imli wali? :lol:
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«Reply #172 on: January 08, 2005, 05:18:29 PM »
thank you MeenaJi

lol Nidhi Baby tu kyun dance kar rahi hai?

aur Mujhe kya khila rahi ho Puzzled !
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«Reply #173 on: January 08, 2005, 05:21:01 PM »
main nahi nikki khila rahi hai......HAJMOLA.
Hazam sab.chahe jab.:lol;

btw i m dancing coz i m happy. :dance:
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #174 on: January 08, 2005, 05:30:54 PM »
so am i

:dance: :dance: :dance:

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chal phut. so ja ab. raat kali mat kar
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #175 on: January 08, 2005, 07:50:17 PM »
WOW......awesome CHipmu!!
jab bhi teri new poem dekhti hu lagta h ai  yehi teri best poem hai!!
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #176 on: January 08, 2005, 08:21:32 PM »
thank you mansi.

this is best because this is for the best one :wink:
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«Reply #177 on: January 08, 2005, 08:51:25 PM »
hmmmmmmmmmmm
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«Reply #178 on: January 09, 2005, 05:13:29 PM »
:lol:
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«Reply #179 on: January 09, 2005, 05:48:37 PM »
Puzzled !
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