What is Missing??:Chit - Chat & General Discussion

Pooja

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Kai mahino se ek kami mehsoos ho rahi hu... socha ajj app sab ke sath apne dil main aai hui baat ko share karu..

pahle jab Yoindia per koi kavita likhi jaati thi... sab us per comments dete the magar sath main us kavita ke jawab mai likhne ki koshish karte the.. aor phir koi aor uska jawab, phir jawab ka jawab. ek intzaar raha karta tha ki kisne kaya likha hoga.... ek ek kavita ke kai kai member apne anusaar jawabi kavita likha karte the....aor Threads page dar page badte chale jaate the.... ek likhne ka nasha sa cha jaaata tha...

Mujhe ajj bhi yaad hai ki kai bar main 4-5 yo-members ke sath ek sath kai threads per ek ke baad ek jawab likha karti thi...Benaam ji, HumTum ji, meena, nikki, nishita, celmira, JHL, Mann ji, khwaish, Jeet, baadal ji.. kitne he naam deemag mai aa rahe hai jinke sath Non stop ghanto likha hai..

Magar ajj kal aisa kuch nahi hai... Sirf wah wah, acha hai, khoob likha, jaise comments milte hai aor mostly threads main ek Poem hoti hai baki sirf comments.

Kaya hum aoro ki kavita ke jawab main agar ho sake to 2-4line ka jawab likhne ki koshishkar sakte hai?

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deepika_divya

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Re: What is Missing??

«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2009, 05:07:10 PM »

Haan Di.. kal kal main iss baare mea baat kar rahi thi.. Mujhe bhi kal aisa feel hua.. ki woh din kitne ache the.. jab hum waah waah ka nahi..balki jawab ka intzaar karte the.. ki aaj usne kya likha hoga..

I still remember those names jinke saath likh likh kar hi main aaj yahan iss mukaam par hun.. like Guarav ( the Badnaam_Shayar).. Ankur_crazy, rockindia and Cool girl ,Vikas and so many ...

Even aap ki thread "Shikayate" par likne mea jomaza aata tha .. sachi....

Aaaj bhi Dil Udaas hota hai tho main Apni purani threads padne lagti hun.. fir bahoot yaad aati hai unn palo ki.. isliye kal overflow ho gaye the woh feelngs jo peotry k roop mea aamne aaye tho socha post kar yun unn yaado ko yahan.. mere jaise aur log honge.. jinne unn palo ki yaad aati hogi...

Kcuh dino pehle Azeem aur Shihad k saath likhne mea bada anand aaya tha

Vikas tho hamesha se saath deta raha hai likhne mea...

Kal parso ABd ji k saath likhne mea maza aaya tha..

But koi ragular saath nahi likhta... Ab sab sirf apni threads pe concentrate jyada karte hai.. ...

Please sab saath likha karo na.. iss tarah aur nikaar aayega sab ke Kalam mea..

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Pooja

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Re: What is Missing??

«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2009, 05:19:05 PM »

Mujhe yaad hai Just hate Love, Bhondu ( dost kavi) aor main shayad he kabhi ek sath online hue hoge... magar Dard main koi 6-7 threads the jin per main likh jaati thi aor wo apne sahuliyat ke hisaab se akar jawab likha karte the...do saal se jayada yah silsila chala hoga..

Benaam ji, HumTum ji, Burniing Desiires, Badnaam shayar, Mann ji, Meena, waheed, Nikki, Shikha, Celmira kuch aor sathi jo online hote the to jee khush ho jaata tha ki chalo agle 4-5 ghante ache beetege likhne main.. aor phir jo likhna shuru hota tha....ek ke baad ek pata nahi chalta tha ki ghnato kaise beet gaye... bas ab yah last karte karte bhi 2 se 3 ghante aor lag jaaya karte the

Veer ji ka pm ayya karta tha ki main itani jaldi parr nahi pa raha hu tu itani jaladi likh kaise rahi hai.. Non-stop ghanto yahi silsila chala karta tha... such main bahoot miss karti hu wo waqat, wo likhne ka josh, her pal yahi rahta tha pata nahi us kavita pe kisne kaya kaya likha hoga...

Fuuny main Rajbir veer ji, LHD, SALAMA4U, NAMKEEN, Samnoj, Humtum ji, NewYorker, nikki, kuch aor naam bhi hai non-stop likhte the aor inko parr kar itani hansi aati thi ki pucho mat..

ek kamaal ka mahol tha Yoindia ka.. main apni real life main kam aor Yo-life main jayada rahti thi...


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_Vicky_

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Re: What is Missing??

«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2009, 05:22:43 PM »

Main Aur Sophi to Aksar is Bare Me Baat karte hain.. Shayad kal Hi Hum dono ne is Subject par baat kari thi.. Main Bhi Yeh cheez bahut dino se dekh raha hoon.. Koi Gar 2 line ya 4 line bhi Likhta hai to Naye Thread Open kar deta hai.. aur thread 10-12 Comments ke baad Peeche chali jati hai.. Nazar bhi nahi aati.. Jabki Pahale Har Member Comments ke sath 2 ya 4 Line Shayari Ki zaroor likh kar jata tha.. aur phir jawab sawal ka Silsila shuru ho jata tha..!!

Main Bahut koshish karta hoon sab ke sath likhne ki.. Par jab Jawab nahi aate to meri bhi Qalam Ruk jati hai.. Main Akela kya karun.. waise abhi Pooja ji, Sophi aur Talat Ji ke sath Likh raha hoon.. kyun ki Aap Jawab zaroor dete ho.. chahe thoda late ho jaye.. par dete zaroor ho.. !! Par aur koi member Aisa nahi karta... aur phir akela Likhna to Mushkil hota hi hai..!! Pahale aisa bhi nahi hota tha ki yeh meri thread ya yeh teri Thread.. sab likhte the bejhijhak.. par aaj kal Kai Member sirf apni Thread par Likhte hain aur Chale jate hain.. Jabki aisa karna accha nahi lagta..!!

Kaash Pahale wale din Laut aayen.. Jab wo sawal Jawab ka silsila chalta hi rahata tha.. aur yoindia se Log Out hone ka dil hi nahi karta tha.. !!

**~** Mann **~**


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Pooja

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Re: What is Missing??

«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2009, 05:29:36 PM »

sahi kaha Mann ji ajj kal jayadatar member apne thread mai atte hai mile commnets per thanks karte hai aor kuch likhna ho to naya thread open ho jaata hai. Pahle jis ne bhi thread open kar diya so kar diya ussi main sab likhte rahte the...

Mujeh yaad hai mai sirf Dard mai likhti thi... magar Meena, HumTum, Benaam ji ne Husan aor Khumar-e-ishaq mai likhna shuru karwaya aor Mann ji ne to sath diya.. ajj tak chal raha hai...Pankshivam ji aor maine ke he thread per na jane kitne pages ek he din mai likh daale

Mujh jaisa insaan Funny main... yah sirf HumTum ji aor NewYorker ji ke he pyar aor adar ki baat thi ki wo mujhse Funny section mai likhwa gaye...

Kitni yaadein hai... AKS JI(ArunKumarSharma JI)Likhne ki itani jaladi hoti thi ki pata nahi kis kis ka short naam kaya kaya rakh diya aor kabhi kisi ne kuch nahi kaha... such main kamaal ki jagah thi yah Yoindia

Palkhi gang..

harsh ji, saba saba, Tinda ji, shayar ji, akela ji... na jaane kitne naam jo deemag main hai juban per nahi aa rahe hai.. above all sweet friend Sanju...

Let's try to bring back those days..


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madhuwesh

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Re: What is Missing??

«Reply #5 on: July 11, 2009, 02:44:01 AM »

Good idea pooja ji,aap sab dil khol kar likhiye mai comments karoongi. icon_thumleft


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Roja

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Re: What is Missing??

«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2009, 03:05:29 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on July 10, 2009, 04:13:35 PM

Didi... aapne bilkul meri mann ki baat kahi hai. Pehle jaisa mahol nahi hai aajkal... Poem pe poem likha karte they Badnam shayar, Baadal, Paani, Muskaan sis aise bahut se members poem pe poem reply karte they. and mai b badi besabri se intezar karti thi. Aaj na jaane kyu aisa koyi karta nahi. Sirf comment Wah wah aur kuch nahi...

Shayari jisne likha, us shayari pe kuch comment kardiya toh to sportive se member le nahi rahe hai. Shayari padkar likhne wala SIRF WAH WAH ke alawa
negetive response chahta hi nahi. Yeh galat hai. But likhne wala member negetive reply ko serious le leta hai. Isliye darr ke mare wah wah karna pad raha hai.

@Vicky bhaiya...

Aapne likha k "Main Bahut koshish karta hoon sab ke sath likhne ki" ...
Mujhe dukh hai k aapne kabhi mere link pe likha nahi. (direct attact )

Mai b yahi chahungi ke kavita likha hai koyi toh kavita ka reply kavita mein do.

I am very much thankful to Uncle ji (ABD Ji) jo mere gazal ka reply dete haim Harash Mahajan ji and Sayyid bhaiya jo mujhe sikhate hai. I am very much greatful to them.

Thanks Pooja di, kuch yahan kehne ka mauka diya yeh thread kholkar.


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Talat

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Re: What is Missing??

«Reply #7 on: July 11, 2009, 09:55:11 AM »

Pooja, Sophi, Vicky, Roja, aapne sab ne ek dam theek kaha. MUjhe yaad hai wo din ki jab sab ke threads main shayari likhte the aur next time online hote time curiosity rehti thi ki kya jawab hoga.....even ek saath likhne ki bhi shart nahin thi......sab apne time ke hisaab se likh jaate the....

Maine sab se zyada funny main Sam ke saath aur Dard aur Miscell. main HumTum ke saath likha hai....bohot bohot likha hai in dono doston ke saath....

Aajkal mere paas itna waqt nahin mil paa raha ki ghanton pehle ki tarah likh paaun....jab bhi aaun to bas rehta hai ki atleast logon ki poems padh ke sarahun...jo ki pehla step hai shayari ka...par haan ab koshish karungi ki atleast do lines ki jawaab main add kar sakun Usual Smile


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Talat

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Re: What is Missing??

«Reply #8 on: July 11, 2009, 11:58:23 PM »

Main kehna chahti hoon aaj maine Jasbir Ji ke ek thread main lagataar likha...jawaab par jawaab.....bohot dinon ke baad aise likha hai....waqt ki kami ijaazat nahin deti...aur kabhi koi aise mil nahin paata online.....I really enjoyed today...Thanks Jasbir Ji


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Roja

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Re: What is Missing??

«Reply #9 on: August 09, 2009, 04:34:37 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on July 11, 2009, 11:58:23 PM

My dear kabhi mere thread mein b likha karo


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salil2002

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Re: What is Missing??

«Reply #10 on: August 11, 2009, 11:18:36 AM »

bahut achche chalo aaj se sab log yeh follow karna warna jaante ho naa kii mera gussa kitna khatarnaak hai laughing4


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ANAAMIKA

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Re: What is Missing??

«Reply #11 on: August 11, 2009, 02:29:07 PM »

Baat tou sahi hai....kavita ka jawab ya use aur badhana ya koi naya mod dena bahut achha lagta hai...
Par ham naye aane walon ko kai baar sankoch ho jata hai ki is thread par likhe ya nahi...aksar jab wo thoda badh jata hai koi bhi do k beech mai....Samajh he nahi paate ki original lines par likhen ki nayi judi linens par...
Kai baar achha lagta hai ki koi ek shabd le kar sab us par likhen jaise "chand" "Ashq""judaai" "Aankhen"....
Agar eysa ho tou sab apni kavita mai nikhaar la sakenge eysa mera sochna hai.....

Quote from: Pooja on July 10, 2009, 04:13:35 PM


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jasbirsingh

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Re: What is Missing??

«Reply #12 on: August 11, 2009, 02:42:54 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on July 11, 2009, 11:58:23 PM

U are rite Celmira Ji... aap ka saath tha toh pata nahi kaisey likhtey chaley gaye... par yeh aajkal kisi aur sey pata nahi ku nahi flow ho raha hai ... may be pooja ji is very true ....

jasbir singh


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cara

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Re: What is Missing??

«Reply #13 on: August 11, 2009, 02:54:48 PM »

APNA TOH AISEY MANNA HAI JO WAH WAH KE SAATH ,DO LINE APNI LIKHTA HAI,
WOH APNA HI LIKHNA SUDARTA HAI,BIGAARTA NAHIN HAI.

AUR JISKE THREAD MEIN LIKHTEY HO,
WOH BHI JAADA KHUSH HO JAATA HAI,
NARAAZ NAHIN HO JAATA HAI.


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Roja

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Re: What is Missing??

«Reply #14 on: August 11, 2009, 03:04:41 PM »

Quote from: -Saahil- on August 11, 2009, 11:18:36 AM

bahut achche chalo aaj se sab log yeh follow karna warna jaante ho naa kii mera gussa kitna khatarnaak hai laughing4

Kitna khatarnak hai Saahil?


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