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skn1944

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21vee sadi ko, aisa diya paridhan,
Is duniya mein ab kon raha insaan.

Kon raha insaan, sabhi bane beyiman,
Sabhi ne badli fitrat,hum ne liya hai jaan.

Pryavaran kya cheez hai sub ne diya bhula,
Charon taraf hai dhoowain ka, ajab silsila.

Kursi par to log, chipak jaate hain is tarah,
Chipak jaata hai lohe se, Chumbak jis tarah.

Nahi kisi ko santushti, chahe ho malamal,
Vaise hi rota hai, jaise rota hai kangal.

Mehnat ke naam par, sabhi bante hain chor,
Dange aur fasad mein,sabhi dikhate zore.

Dharam ke naam par, ban jaate hain sher,
Karam karne ko bolo, ho jaate hain dher.

Hak apna malum hai, nahi malum hai firz,
Kamai ho chahe zero, sabhi mangte karz.

21vee sadi ko, aisa diya paridhan,
Kisi ki zindgi mein, nahi kahin Bhagwan.

Surinder Narang


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cara

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Re: 21vee Sadi

«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2010, 04:29:33 AM »

WAH KYA BAAT HAI SKN1944 JI.....

21VEE SADI KI HAR EK BAAT APNE SACH KAHI HAI
INSAAN TOH HAI PAR KAHI BHI INSAANIYAT NAHI HAI......


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skn1944

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Re: 21vee Sadi

«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2010, 07:27:41 PM »

A hard reality


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Intezar

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Re: 21vee Sadi

«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2010, 08:41:57 PM »

dosh 21vee sadi ka nahin hai dost...

hum khud hi huye itne khudgarz hain
ki khudgarzi mein jeene ki aadat ho chali hai !

mitne ko kuch bacha nahin nishaan tak bhi
har ore sannaatte se goonzti andheri gali hai !

huye hum bhi nilaam is imaan ki numaayish mein,
lagta hai ab is zindagi se to ye maut bhali hai !

phir bhi dekh kar in tarastee aankhon ko yahaan
kuch badal jaane ki phir ek ummeed ho chali hai... !

Intezar !


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Re: 21vee Sadi

«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2010, 04:10:44 AM »

kya baat hai bht khubbb skn ji...bht mast likha hai aapne...

Quote from: skn1944 on October 21, 2010, 03:24:24 AM


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Re: 21vee Sadi

«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2010, 04:11:20 AM »

aapke 2 liners too gud cara ji...
Applause

Quote from: cara on October 21, 2010, 04:29:33 AM

WAH KYA BAAT HAI SKN1944 JI.....

21VEE SADI KI HAR EK BAAT APNE SACH KAHI HAI
INSAAN TOH HAI PAR KAHI BHI INSAANIYAT NAHI HAI......


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Re: 21vee Sadi

«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2010, 04:12:12 AM »

intezar ji aap to kamaal ho ji...mastam mast reply ji...bht achchz likha hai aapne

Quote from: Intezar on October 21, 2010, 08:41:57 PM


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