-~ Chale Jaa Rahe Hai ~-

[Tosha]

Tute khuwabon ko pairo tale raundhte chale jaa rahe hai
khud se aapne kadmo ke nishan saaja rahe hai

kya sawal karen zindgi se, ka aab bhi paheliya bujhate rahe
teri bandgi main e-malik khud ko jala rahe hai

aab kya kare umeed ki iss kali raat ke baad ujala hoga
chand khushiyo ke share kafan aapna bana rahe hai

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[Naya_Daur]

Tute khuwabon ko pairo tale raundhte chale jaa rahe hai
khud se aapne kadmo ke nishan saaja rahe hai

Peotess is depressed.all her dreams n wishes are broken. she is feeling very lonely n helpless

kya sawal karen zindgi se, ka aab bhi paheliya bujhate rahe
teri bandgi main e-malik khud ko jala rahe hai

what makes her life so miserable? why it had happened to her?? she thinks she have been very humble,down to earth n simple human being but why life had given her tough time
 

aab kya kare umeed ki iss kali raat ke baad ujala hoga
chand khushiyo ke share kafan aapna bana rahe hai

No Hope. No expectations.happiness is turning into Sorrow ......

Personal Comments: Poem is missing something.

[Tosha]

he eehe e!!

yeh missing somthing ... i agree ... it an't complete. but i can nomore feel that depressed as i was feeling that very day ... i was sitting in the tube(metro train) and was feeling that the heavens are falling down on me

waise ... well explained ... but means a lot more!!