Dil-o-dimag pe hamesha

by harinderbhasin on July 13, 2015, 07:42:39 AM

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Dil-o-dimag pe hamesha tumhara suroor rehta hai,
Main hoon tumhara mujhe yeh guroor rehta hai,
Tu har pal mere liye hazir huzoor rehta hai,
Phir bhi main tujhe paa na saka kyunki…
Har baar mujh main hi kasoor rehta hai.


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Re: sufi

«Reply #1 on: July 13, 2015, 09:38:13 AM »

Hi everyone, I am new to shayari. Looking for honest feedback from the experienced people.


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Re: Dil-o-dimag pe hamesha

«Reply #2 on: July 13, 2015, 01:46:10 PM »

Quote from: harinderbhasin on July 13, 2015, 07:42:39 AM

gud


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Re: Dil-o-dimag pe hamesha

«Reply #3 on: July 13, 2015, 03:06:39 PM »

Quote from: harinderbhasin on July 13, 2015, 09:38:13 AM

Hi everyone, I am new to shayari. Looking for honest feedback from the experienced people.

Harinder Bhasin Jee this is excellent, keep it up. Welcome to yoindia.
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Re: Dil-o-dimag pe hamesha

«Reply #4 on: July 14, 2015, 06:46:02 AM »

अच्छा है.....लिखते रहिये.....


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Re: Dil-o-dimag pe hamesha

«Reply #6 on: July 14, 2015, 06:33:29 PM »

Quote from: harinderbhasin on July 13, 2015, 07:42:39 AM


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Re: sufi

«Reply #7 on: July 14, 2015, 06:37:13 PM »

Quote from: harinderbhasin on July 13, 2015, 09:38:13 AM

Hi everyone, I am new to shayari. Looking for honest feedback from the experienced people.

ek baar buss mohabbat mein naakaam ho jaao khud-b-khud behtreen shaayar bann jaao ge warnaa umr guzar jaaye gi likhte -likhte shaayri nahin kar paao ge !

apart from joke keep writing and reading and gradually you will come to know how to write i hope !