Door bohot door humko jaana hai !!!

[Talat]

Bilkul,

Ye section banaya hi isiliye gaya hai taaki yahan positive criticism se mere jaise logon (jo sirf shuq ki wajah se likhte hain; kahin seekha ya ta'aleem nahin li hai) unhe faaida ho....

Shukriya S. Naami 

Aap ki mazeed kaarvaai ka intezaar rahega 

[twinkle-star]

well done

[Talat]

Thanks

[Azeem Azaad]

Waah Talat Behna, Kya Khoob Yaar,.

[Raj.]

 
Bhoooooooooooooooot achhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa laga

[Talat]

Thanks, Azeem, Raj

[khamosh_aawaaz]

Phoolon ke daaman main chupe hote hain kaante
Muskurahat jaane kitni saazishon ko hai chupaye
Dost ban kar dagha deta aaya hai yeh zamana
Door bohot door ab humko hai jaana

Sheeshe ko bhala pathar hum banaye bhi kaise
Aankhon main utre dard ko chupaye bhi kaise
Mushkil hai ek pal marna ek pal jiye jaana
Door bohot door ab humko hai jaana

Rooh tak utri hai jo najaane kaisi yeh thakan hai
Koi nahin apna har shakhs khud main magan hai
Laut kar wapis jahan se na kabhi hai aana
Door bohot door ab humko hai jaana

Woh ek des titliyon ka woh taaron ki ek nagri
Ab tak jise chup chup kar dekha kiya humne
Khwabon ki us nagri se pariyon ko hai aana
Door bohot door ab humko hai jaana

bAHUT KHOOB DR SAHIBA

[Ram Krishan Rastogi]

  :clapping:आदरनिय ,मोहतरमा जी , आपने सही लिखा और फरमाया पर कभी कभी दूर जाकर ही मंजिल मिलती है कुछ खोकर ही पाने को मिलता है.