~~~~~..I Feel for you..~~~~~:Critics and Review only Forum

Tosha

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its the look in you eyes and make me cry
your innocence and your Fragrance of love
you mould me you kiss me so temder and sweet
and do just anything to make me smile

you touch me and make me feel strong
you hold me so that nothing could ever go wrong
you hug and say you will always be mine
and bless our make it srtong and devine

you know without you i can nothing be
you know without me things will not go right
you brick our home and help rare it bright
and forgive me every time i end up with a fight

you are so wonderful and i love you so much
hey boy! hond my hand and treat me fair
all i have in this world will be yours
all i need is love from you to me may bestow


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phoenix

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«Reply #1 on: March 29, 2006, 05:55:55 PM »

A LOVELY POEM I MUST SAY TOSHA Ji

i poet(here its our dear tosha) is deeply in luv wth a guy, they r having a easy going life but the gal, sunwhere in her heart, has a doubt regarding there relationship so is telling the boy what they mean to each other.

basically this shows the teenage soul which the love has relightened in her heart. Usual Smile


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Tosha

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«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2006, 08:45:51 AM »

NIce Pho in ex Ji ... !! u r close!!


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tanha dil tanha safar

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«Reply #3 on: June 17, 2006, 11:58:43 AM »

such a nice poem Tosha.........
I know for whome you have written this its m..........

Am i right?

Here the gal is just trying to say that how much she loves that innocent guy, who ever tries to make her comfortable.......


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~Garfield~

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«Reply #4 on: June 18, 2006, 11:59:22 AM »

OMG ... I can't believe TOSHA has written this ... goodness gracious!!

Ya~! you r rt TDTS tongue3


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