kaise kahu – Shubh Sawagatam!!

by Pooja on February 12, 2006, 04:46:44 AM
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Yah meri old post hai, magar mai parrna chahti hu ki yahan per app sab isse parr kar isko kis roop mai dekhaty hai:   

yah shor hai jeevan ka, yah matam hai maut ka
yah nafrat hay insaano ki, yah daur hai goliyon ka
yah siskiyan hay insaaniyat ki, jis per baras rahi tandav ki gunj hay
jahan dekho faily hay dahshat, na jaane kis yug ka yah roop hay!!

yah jung hay mazhabo ki, na jaane kaya inki bhukh hai
dollat ke nashein main inki insaaniyat chaknachoor hay
her koi apne swarth main, her koi apne app main
badalein hay halaat, badala hua her kisi ka naya roop hay!!


Kon pukare kisko yahan, yakin ab kis per koi karain
Bichi hui lasho ki choro, jeeti lasho ko kaise jeeye
Badhawasi ka alam, us per janam leta yah Adam
Soch rahi hu, kaise pukaru, kaise kahu – Shubh Sawagatam!!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2006, 08:22:50 AM »
Poetress ne aaj ke Badalte waqt ko bayan kia hai........Aaj insaaniat naam ki toh koi cheez hai nahi.......toh usi p first pehera likha hai......Jisko dekho ek doosre ko lootne me laga hai aisa lagta hai pad ke....Jaise sab log Bina wajah ek doosre ko maar rahe ho.....Sab Daulat k peeche ek doosre ko kaat rahe ho jaise.......Aur aaj k waqt ko dekhte hue......naye janme baccho ko Adam kaha hai.....isliye unhe Shub Swagatam kehne me hichkicha rahi hain........but this all totally based on TODAY.........bilkul sahi bayan kia hai badalta daur......Wonderfull.......
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ranjeet_rp
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2006, 06:42:02 AM »
in this poem poet has discribed her feeling about the ongoing era very beautifuly,

in first four lines she has described the upper hand of hatred over the humanism.in this era gun is the boss and human is in loss because of hatred between the humens.every human lives in the fear of life in this era.

in next four lines pooja has described the reason of the hatred among people.religion,money and selfishness is the reason of hatred in this era and this hatred is created by mean and money minded people.in this era every one is selfish and mean because of changing time.

in last four lines she has expressed her grief which is the grief of every humen being (which is really humen). she doesnt see any hope for the humens in this era by seeing the hatred all over. so she does not want to say welcome to the new era or new year.
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Tosha
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«Reply #3 on: February 22, 2006, 02:48:55 AM »
ek inspirational poem hai ... motivational na hi sahi lakin yeh kuch batati hai ke waquth kaisa chal raha hai ... log kaise hai ... zamana kaisa hai ...
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mrkotians
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2006, 11:43:46 PM »
HMMMM.... hum dhanya hain pooja... bahut bahut shukriya...
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: July 13, 2009, 05:18:50 PM »
Poetress ne aaj ke Badalte waqt ko bayan kia hai........Aaj insaaniat naam ki toh koi cheez hai nahi.......toh usi p first pehera likha hai......Jisko dekho ek doosre ko lootne me laga hai aisa lagta hai pad ke....Jaise sab log Bina wajah ek doosre ko maar rahe ho.....Sab Daulat k peeche ek doosre ko kaat rahe ho jaise.......Aur aaj k waqt ko dekhte hue......naye janme baccho ko Adam kaha hai.....isliye unhe Shub Swagatam kehne me hichkicha rahi hain........but this all totally based on TODAY.........bilkul sahi bayan kia hai badalta daur......Wonderfull.......

Thanks BD ji!!
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injured.warrior
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«Reply #6 on: July 13, 2009, 05:49:38 PM »
chand lines me apne aaj ki har baat kah di pooja ji.waqai me aaj sub haiwan bane huye hai.shukriya apka jo apne ye share kiya notworthy notworthy
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