Mere Maula

[aashish41284]

(Critics/comments invited on blog)

Har dua kabul hui merri
Phira se koi intazaar de mere maula,
Aankhon ke iss banjarpan ko,
Phir ashkon ki baarish de maula.

For complete visit: http://pennedscripts.blogspot.in/2009/04/blog-post_1071.html

[sbechain]

(Critics/comments invited on blog)

Har dua kabul hui merri
Phira se koi intazaar de mere maula,
Aankhon ke iss banjarpan ko,
Phir ashkon ki baarish de maula.

For complete visit: http://pennedscripts.blogspot.in/2009/04/blog-post_1071.html

main ne aap ke kalaam ko padha . per mujhe maza nahin aaya kyon ke MAULA se hamesha achi doa karni chahiye.aur khair ki doa karni chahiye.

 

  aage se ache kalaam likhein . ye hi meri iltejah hai. maafi chahoon gi. jo mujhe mahsoos hua kah diya.

keep writing dear...............! all the best

[masoom shahjada]

Sheba ji ki bat se m bhi sahmat hu.

[sksaini4]

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