Tanha hai is qadar....

[Saba_Saba]

Tanha hai is qadar ke tanhayi sisak uthi
Sookhe huye phoolon se yaado ki mehek uthi


Uljhi si zindagi hai uljhan na suljh saki
Jis ne ki yeh koshish us ki bhi ulajh uthi


Dil me daba ke rakhi thi har ek chingari
Ek teri kaj rawi se shola ban sulag uthi


Har suu tha habs ka aalam har shakh sookhi
Tu aaya ban ke sawan har bulbul chehek uthi

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[Azeem Azaad]

Bahoot Hi Badiya Sher Hai Aapka Saba Ji,.
pardhkar Accha Laga,.

[Saba_Saba is back]

Yo Friends

i m presenting this poem again for your comment.

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[madhuwesh]

Wow bahut bahut khoob Saba ji,heart touching poem.marvelous creation.keep it up.excellent

[Saba_Saba is back]

Azeem Ji aur Madhuwesh Ji ... yaha par aap ko poet ki poem par comment dena hota hai k woh kya kehna chahta hai


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[AbhiTamrakar]

bahut khoob he ji......badhiya likha hee~

[skn1944]

Very good bhai jaan, is mein thoda dard bhi hai aur dil ki awaz bhi.
Bahoot khoob byan kiya hai purani yaadon ko.
Surinder Narang.
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[skn1944]

Beutiful and Heart Touching.