गरचे जिगर ना हो beqrar

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muflison, yateemon pe jiski najar na ho
wo adhoora doulatmand hai jisme sabar na ho,

doulat ko aata dekh kar imaandaari ne kaha
shayad ab is dar pe kabhi meri kadar na ho,

waqif-e-halat hun, tabhi to chot lagti hai
sajishen aisi ho teri ke mujhko khabar na ho,

roj boodhi aankho se raste ko takta hai
roji ki khatir koi beta dar-badar na ho,

rawan hosale rahe to kuch kar jaoge "beqrar"
fouladi jism bhi bekar hai garche jigar na ho,

मफलिसो, यतीमों पे जिसकी नज़र ना हो
वो अधूरा दौलतमंद है जिसमे सबर ना हो,

दौलत को आता देख कर ईमानदारी ने कहा
शायद अब इस दर पे कभी मेरी कदर ना हो,

वाक़िफ़-ए-हालत हूँ, तभी तो चोट लगती है
साजिशें ऐसी हो तेरी के मुझको खबर ना हो,

रोज बूढ़ी आँखो से रास्ते को तकता है
रोज़ी की खातिर कोई बेटा दर-बदर ना हो,

रवाँ होसले रहे तो कुछ कर जाओगे "बेक़रार"
फौलादी जिस्म भी बेकार है गरचे जिगर ना हो,
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2011, 06:52:10 PM »

Bahut Khoob Beqrar ji... Usual Smile
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roj budhi aankhon se raste ko takta hai koi..
roji ki khatir koi beta dar-ba-dar na ho...
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2011, 06:53:51 PM »
Quote from: bekarar on August 08, 2011, 06:44:22 PM
muflison, yateemon pe jiski najar na ho
wo adhoora doulatmand hai jisme sabar na ho,

doulat ko aata dekh kar imaandaari ne kaha
shayad ab is dar pe kabhi meri kadar na ho,

waqif-e-halat hun, tabhi to chot lagti hai
sajishen aisi ho teri ke mujhko khabar na ho,

roj boodhi aankho se raste ko takta hai
roji ki khatir koi beta dar-badar na ho,

rawan hosale rahe to kuch kar jaoge "beqrar"
fouladi jism bhi bekar hai garche jigar na ho,

मफलिसो, यतीमों पे जिसकी नज़र ना हो
वो अधूरा दौलतमंद है जिसमे सबर ना हो,

दौलत को आता देख कर ईमानदारी ने कहा
शायद अब इस दर पे कभी मेरी कदर ना हो,

वाक़िफ़-ए-हालत हूँ, तभी तो चोट लगती है
साजिशें ऐसी हो तेरी के मुझको खबर ना हो,

रोज बूढ़ी आँखो से रास्ते को तकता है
रोज़ी की खातिर कोई बेटा दर-बदर ना हो,

रवाँ होसले रहे तो कुछ कर जाओगे "बेक़रार"
फौलादी जिस्म भी बेकार है गरचे जिगर ना हो,



bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2011, 07:06:21 PM »
Bekaraar Sahaab Aadaab!

Masha Allah janab Masha Allah kia kahne aapke
andaaz e bayaan aur gehre ahsaas O khayaal ke..

Behad umdaa tareeke se aapne tanziyaa ashaaroN
ko lafzi jamaa pehnaaya hai... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad fikramand aur dilfareb rahe.. Usual Smile
Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

          


Quote from: bekarar on August 08, 2011, 06:44:22 PM
muflison, yateemon pe jiski najar na ho
wo adhoora doulatmand hai jisme sabar na ho,

Kia kahne janab bahut umdaa ... badi
gehri soch ka muzahera kiya hai.. kuch aisa hi khayaal
humare zaheN meiN bhi Parwaaz kar gaya tha jise humne
aise dhaala Usual Smile
          

Jinke paas kharch karne ka salikha nahi hai
WoH ameer e shahar hoNge par khalifa nahi hai    


doulat ko aata dekh kar imaandaari ne kaha
shayad ab is dar pe kabhi meri kadar na ho,

Waah janab waah Masha Allah kia
Gazb ka khayaal kalam baNd kiya janab dil baaG
Baag ho gaya... is umdaa ashaar par dil se
hazaroN daad Hazir hai janab daad daad daad ..
Aikdum master stroke hai yeH sher ..  Applause Applause Applause
        

waqif-e-halat hun, tabhi to chot lagti hai
sajishen aisi ho teri ke mujhko khabar na ho,

Achcha khayaal hai janab daad Usual Smile
Sher ki bayani kuch asardaar nahi huyi.. Kisi
aur surat meiN fir se likhiyeNga Usual Smile          

roj boodhi aankho se raste ko takta hai
roji ki khatir koi beta dar-badar na ho,

Waah waah waah janab aapke khayaaloN
ke kia kaheN bus bahut khoob daad Usual Smile          

rawan hosale rahe to kuch kar jaoge "beqrar"
fouladi jism bhi bekar hai garche jigar na ho,

Masha Allah Masha Allah kia kaheN
janab behad umdaa shayari kar rahe haiN aap.. Usual Smile
is umdaa Maqte par dil se daad Usual Smile          




Janab Bekaraar Sahaab .... Aisi umdaa
kalaam pesh karne ke liye hum aapke tahe dil se shukra-
guzaar haiN Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa aur dilkash kalaamoN ke saath bazm meiN
aate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile          
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2011, 07:15:08 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 08, 2011, 07:06:21 PM
Bekaraar Sahaab Aadaab!

Masha Allah janab Masha Allah kia kahne aapke
andaaz e bayaan aur gehre ahsaas O khayaal ke..

Behad umdaa tareeke se aapne tanziyaa ashaaroN
ko lafzi jamaa pehnaaya hai... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad fikramand aur dilfareb rahe.. Usual Smile
Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

         


Janab Bekaraar Sahaab .... Aisi umdaa
kalaam pesh karne ke liye hum aapke tahe dil se shukra-
guzaar haiN Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa aur dilkash kalaamoN ke saath bazm meiN
aate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         

Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 08, 2011, 07:06:21 PM
Bekaraar Sahaab Aadaab!

Masha Allah janab Masha Allah kia kahne aapke
andaaz e bayaan aur gehre ahsaas O khayaal ke..

Behad umdaa tareeke se aapne tanziyaa ashaaroN
ko lafzi jamaa pehnaaya hai... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad fikramand aur dilfareb rahe.. Usual Smile
Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

         


Janab Bekaraar Sahaab .... Aisi umdaa
kalaam pesh karne ke liye hum aapke tahe dil se shukra-
guzaar haiN Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa aur dilkash kalaamoN ke saath bazm meiN
aate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         



jiske paas kharch kare ka saliqa nahin hai,
woh ameer-e-shahar hoga per khalifa nahin hai

waah parwaaz khan sahab kya khoob kaha hai


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«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2011, 01:47:33 PM »
Quote from: bekarar on August 08, 2011, 06:44:22 PM
muflison, yateemon pe jiski najar na ho
wo adhoora doulatmand hai jisme sabar na ho,

doulat ko aata dekh kar imaandaari ne kaha
shayad ab is dar pe kabhi meri kadar na ho,

waqif-e-halat hun, tabhi to chot lagti hai
sajishen aisi ho teri ke mujhko khabar na ho,

roj boodhi aankho se raste ko takta hai
roji ki khatir koi beta dar-badar na ho,

rawan hosale rahe to kuch kar jaoge "beqrar"
fouladi jism bhi bekar hai garche jigar na ho,

मफलिसो, यतीमों पे जिसकी नज़र ना हो
वो अधूरा दौलतमंद है जिसमे सबर ना हो,

दौलत को आता देख कर ईमानदारी ने कहा
शायद अब इस दर पे कभी मेरी कदर ना हो,

वाक़िफ़-ए-हालत हूँ, तभी तो चोट लगती है
साजिशें ऐसी हो तेरी के मुझको खबर ना हो,

रोज बूढ़ी आँखो से रास्ते को तकता है
रोज़ी की खातिर कोई बेटा दर-बदर ना हो,

रवाँ होसले रहे तो कुछ कर जाओगे "बेक़रार"
फौलादी जिस्म भी बेकार है गरचे जिगर ना हो,



Sanjeev Bhai Kya Kehne Aapke...

Iss Ghazal Ke Har Ek Sher Par Hazaron Daad!!!!! Naa Jaane Main Kitni Baar Yeh Ghazal padh Chuka Hoon...Har ek Sher Zindagi Ki haqeeqat Bayaan Karta Hua..Kya Kahoon, yeh Zaroor Keh Sakta Hoon Ke Maine Iss Bahut Kareeb Se mehsoos Kiya..

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Bhai

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«Reply #6 on: August 10, 2011, 01:54:30 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 08, 2011, 07:06:21 PM
Bekaraar Sahaab Aadaab!

Masha Allah janab Masha Allah kia kahne aapke
andaaz e bayaan aur gehre ahsaas O khayaal ke..

Behad umdaa tareeke se aapne tanziyaa ashaaroN
ko lafzi jamaa pehnaaya hai... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad fikramand aur dilfareb rahe.. Usual Smile
Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

         


Janab Bekaraar Sahaab .... Aisi umdaa
kalaam pesh karne ke liye hum aapke tahe dil se shukra-
guzaar haiN Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa aur dilkash kalaamoN ke saath bazm meiN
aate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         


Waah waah Waah!!! bahut Khoob parwaaz ji..

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«Reply #7 on: August 10, 2011, 01:57:27 PM »
bekaraar ji…
aapki post padha aur nishabd ho gaya…

kamaal ke alfaazo me aapne hakikat me piroya…
janaab hats off…
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«Reply #8 on: August 12, 2011, 06:21:12 PM »
Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on August 08, 2011, 06:52:10 PM

Bahut Khoob Beqrar ji... Usual Smile
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roj budhi aankhon se raste ko takta hai koi..
roji ki khatir koi beta dar-ba-dar na ho...


touhid sahab...is mamuli si koshish ko sarahne aur waqt dene ke liye sukriya...janab
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«Reply #9 on: August 12, 2011, 06:22:46 PM »
Quote from: Sheba on August 08, 2011, 06:53:51 PM

bahut bahut khoob

tah-e-dil se shukriya sheba ji......aapne is koshish ko saraha
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«Reply #10 on: August 12, 2011, 06:39:14 PM »
Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 08, 2011, 07:06:21 PM
Bekaraar Sahaab Aadaab!

Masha Allah janab Masha Allah kia kahne aapke
andaaz e bayaan aur gehre ahsaas O khayaal ke..

Behad umdaa tareeke se aapne tanziyaa ashaaroN
ko lafzi jamaa pehnaaya hai... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad fikramand aur dilfareb rahe.. Usual Smile
Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

         


Janab Bekaraar Sahaab .... Aisi umdaa
kalaam pesh karne ke liye hum aapke tahe dil se shukra-
guzaar haiN Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa aur dilkash kalaamoN ke saath bazm meiN
aate rahiye... Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         


parwaz sahab...ek bar fir se housalon ko char chand lagane ke liye aapka dil ke har kone se shukriya........


jiske paas kharch kare ka saliqa nahin hai,
woh ameer-e-shahar hoga per khalifa nahin hai


aapne jo sher kaha...... alfazon ki satik adaygi se sher bahoot hi wazandaar aur pur-asar ban pada hai....besakhta hi labon pe chad jaata hai......bahoot khoob...

waqif-e-halat hun, tabhi to chot lagti hai
sajishen aisi ho teri ke mujhko khabar na ho,

is sher me shayar ne un doston ka jikr kiya hai jo dost ban kar dushmano ki tarah sajishen karne me lage rahte hain........aur taqleef tab hoti jab hame ye pata bhi lag jata hai jise hum dost samjhe the ....wo hi log sajishen karne me lage hue hain.....
to ..shayar aise logon ko salah de raha hai ki.....sajishen bhale karo....lekin is tarah ki mujhe pata na chale.......pata chal jata hai to bharose ko dil ko gahri chot lagti hai ......
is khayal ko agar aap apne shabdon me likh saken to mujhe khushi hogi............

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«Reply #11 on: August 12, 2011, 06:44:15 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on August 10, 2011, 01:47:33 PM
Sanjeev Bhai Kya Kehne Aapke...

Iss Ghazal Ke Har Ek Sher Par Hazaron Daad!!!!! Naa Jaane Main Kitni Baar Yeh Ghazal padh Chuka Hoon...Har ek Sher Zindagi Ki haqeeqat Bayaan Karta Hua..Kya Kahoon, yeh Zaroor Keh Sakta Hoon Ke Maine Iss Bahut Kareeb Se mehsoos Kiya..

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Mere Bhai

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khwaish bro,
itni sanjidagi se aapne ghazal ko padha....aur mahsoos kiya....bas yun samjho k mera likhna kamyab raha....shukriya bhai
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«Reply #12 on: August 12, 2011, 06:46:37 PM »
Quote from: sarfira on August 10, 2011, 01:57:27 PM
bekaraar ji…
aapki post padha aur nishabd ho gaya…

kamaal ke alfaazo me aapne hakikat me piroya…
janaab hats off…


sarfira ji,
aapne waqt diya...aapka shukrgujar hun....sath banaye rakhen
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WAH WAH WAH.. EK EK SHABAD MOTI SE PIROYA HUA..

WAH
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«Reply #14 on: January 16, 2012, 07:35:08 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on January 15, 2012, 07:21:27 PM
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WAH WAH WAH.. EK EK SHABAD MOTI SE PIROYA HUA..

WAH

muddaton ke baad aapki daad haasil hui, yakeen maniye yoindia pe aapki moujudagi se badi khushi hui........aate rahen aur hame bhi padhne ka mouka den
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