A Bit Of Love

by Bhupinder Kaur on June 28, 2013, 02:34:09 AM
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Bhupinder Kaur
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I need nothing
More than "A Bit Of Love"
From bottom of one’s Heart
A one, which is Unshared
A one, which can't b Withered
A one, which knows the Meaning of Care
A one, which knows to Dare
2Stand, 2b Friend
When World comes to An End
A one, which can b there
When no one else could be there
To understand Emotions, Feelings
How they r Lingering off
A one, which can Stay Always
& never knows, how to b Far Away
A one, which can dwell Forever in ME
Yes, I Need Nothing More than
A Bit Of Love
A True Dream
4Which Everyone Wish's
& Surely God will Bestow Me
A Bit Of Love...........Ameen

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nashwani
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2013, 03:14:39 AM »
Keep ur fingers crossed bhupinder jee..nd God vl definately bless u with a lot of love nd all the true feelings dat u have put here..happy9

Btw great composition..happy9
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2013, 03:26:07 AM »
I need nothing
More than "A Bit Of Love"
From bottom of one’s Heart
A one, which is Unshared
A one, which can't b Withered
A one, which knows the Meaning of Care
A one, which knows to Dare
2Stand, 2b Friend
When World comes to An End
A one, which can b there
When no one else could be there
To understand Emotions, Feelings
How they r Lingering off
A one, which can Stay Always
& never knows, how to b Far Away
A one, which can dwell Forever in ME
Yes, I Need Nothing More than
A Bit Of Love
A True Dream
4Which Everyone Wish's
& Surely God will Bestow Me
A Bit Of Love...........Ameen


Nice Feelings.
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sbechain
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2013, 03:43:23 AM »
I need nothing
More than "A Bit Of Love"
From bottom of one’s Heart
A one, which is Unshared
A one, which can't b Withered
A one, which knows the Meaning of Care
A one, which knows to Dare
2Stand, 2b Friend
When World comes to An End
A one, which can b there
When no one else could be there
To understand Emotions, Feelings
How they r Lingering off
A one, which can Stay Always
& never knows, how to b Far Away
A one, which can dwell Forever in ME
Yes, I Need Nothing More than
A Bit Of Love
A True Dream
4Which Everyone Wish's
& Surely God will Bestow Me
A Bit Of Love...........Ameen



ameen.........!every one's wishes icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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@Kaash
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2013, 04:06:05 AM »
nice poetry!
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2013, 09:30:48 AM »
great
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2013, 09:44:01 AM »
nice one.......
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ambalika sharma
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2013, 12:00:31 PM »
a bit of appreciation from my side to u bhupinder...nice lines... Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2013, 12:54:54 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2013, 12:50:38 PM »
saying u don't anything except for a bit of love, actually u have asked everything u cud have wished for in love, that is how beautiful love actually is... well written dear, do keep writing the same way...
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