Broke Me Into Two....

by palkhi on January 12, 2010, 02:18:43 AM
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He Left Breaking Me Into Two,
And Asked... "What did I Do?",
I Kept Waiting For Him By My Window,
and He Never showed,
My Heartbeat Would Skip A Beat, Every Time I Heard His Name,
He Came Back Years Later and Asked... "What Did I Do?",
I Stopped Breathing, When I Saw Him,
My Eyes Teared Up, After Remembering the Moments I Had Spent Without Him,
He Wipped My Tears and asked... "Whats Wrong?",
I Looked Into His Eyes, and Whispered... "I Love You...",
He Looked back at me and asked..."What Am I To Do?",
He Left Then, Breaking Me Into Two Again....
 
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2010, 03:03:14 AM »
Wonderful and really touching poem.great creation Palkhi ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2010, 08:58:05 AM »
its to heart touching, mindblowing....
keep it up. icon_thumleft
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cara
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2010, 09:04:17 AM »
WAH KYA BAAT HAI....PALKHI JI....

ONCE HE LEFT BREAKING ME INTO TWO
YEARS LATER HE CAME AGAIN
I THOUGHT HIS MIND MUST HAVE CHANGED
HE BROKE ME INTO TWO AGAIN
I ASKED WHY DID YOU DO ,PLEASE EXPLAIN
HE REPLIED MY MIND FOR YOU
IS NOT YET CHANGED..
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2010, 01:42:42 PM »
Nice Palkhi Ji
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2010, 06:34:04 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  sad10 sad10
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: January 13, 2010, 10:41:16 PM »
Nice creation Palkhi Ji
N  good response Cara Ji
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