-(- cheating innocence -)-:English

Affluent

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Tears will not fall now
Desiires will not burn
There's nothing you left
Except bold aggression

You never bothered to gimme relief
I am left alone to sober in grief
The pain in my heart will soon dry
I will stride,but scars never die

You were the one who looked for true relation
Someone to embrace to arouse your sensation
Now you have place only for your lusty tempatations
Doesnt want give a second thought to our relation

go on,and on, with your bogus pride
i can manage,without you by my side
all i know is the only one bottom line
as,bullshits never lead to peaceful life

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Today, i am feeling as the innocence is the most of the lethal emotions , which no one should possess once he/she stepped into his/her adolocence age. Someone may play very horrible with this.. PLs do comment . ( i personally feel. poeple here dont give much response,specially english section, as somewhere quoted by friend Janasheen.


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Roja

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Re: -(- cheating innocence -)-

«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2007, 05:58:55 AM »

Quote from: "Affluent"

You were the one who looked for true relation
Someone to embrace to arouse your sensation
Now you have place only for your lusty tempatations
Doesnt want give a second thought to our relation

go on,and on, with your bogus pride
i can manage,without you by my side
all i know is the only one bottom line
as,bullshits never lead to peaceful life

Lovely 1.. I liked the above lines. Keep flowing your emotions.

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:Affluent
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Today, i am feeling as the innocence is the most of the lethal emotions , which no one should possess once he/she stepped into his/her adolocence age. Someone may play very horrible with this.. PLs do comment . ( i personally feel. poeple here dont give much response,specially english section, as somewhere quoted by friend Janasheen.

Yes i too agree with you and Janasheen. Somehow these english
sections are not that much encouraged by Yo members.


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Shikha12

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Re: -(- cheating innocence -)-

«Reply #2 on: November 29, 2007, 02:14:39 PM »

Very well expressed!!!
One could feel pain as well as anger of the Poet..

Well Done Affluent..


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Affluent

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Re: -(- cheating innocence -)-

«Reply #3 on: November 29, 2007, 09:03:11 PM »

Thanks Roja...

Quote from: Shikha12 on November 29, 2007, 02:14:39 PM

Very well expressed!!!
One could feel pain as well as anger of the Poet..

Well Done Affluent..

Thanks shikha, i am glad, someone read very carefully and found aggression in my words. Thats what i was feeling on that day.

Thanks again to both of you !!!


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deepika_divya

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Re: -(- cheating innocence -)-

«Reply #4 on: November 30, 2007, 03:52:01 AM »

Very well said.. Affluent.. Very touching.. I liked it...


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natural

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Re: -(- cheating innocence -)-

«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2007, 09:02:23 AM »

I liked especially these lines Affluent....
Very well written..

Quote from: Affluent on November 21, 2007, 09:14:09 AM

You never bothered to gimme relief
I am left alone to sober in grief
The pain in my heart will soon dry
I will stride,but scars never die

Although I agree to whatever u said but still we like innocence(not for ourselves but for others).. Isn't it so.. tongue3

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Today, i am feeling as the innocence is the most of the lethal emotions , which no one should possess once he/she stepped into his/her adolocence age. Someone may play very horrible with this.


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