Dead Existence

by Roja on April 12, 2008, 07:25:49 PM

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An evening, when azimuth
Slowly turned orange
"My presence hardly matters",
You said to me..

At that moment,
I had no words to reply
As time went by
Two segments of life
One with you
One without you
Insisted my soul to
Define, My existence

Memories came flashing
Feeling of tender touches
The care to take right step
While walking a crisscross
Covering each other.
From heavy rains.
From heat of the day.
And from long dark nights
Of bitter quarrel

These things have vanished
My presence without you
Is life with Dead Existence...!!
(Mine)


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Re: *Dead Existence*

«Reply #1 on: April 12, 2008, 07:43:35 PM »

Effective presentation of thoughts. I am not much into english poetry but still it was good to read. Good effort.


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SAM ANDREWS

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Re: *Dead Existence*

«Reply #2 on: April 12, 2008, 11:09:56 PM »

wonderful roja ... keep writing such wonderful poems


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baadal102

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Re: *Dead Existence*

«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2008, 03:33:53 PM »

good job roja

Baadal


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: *Dead Existence*

«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2008, 04:51:54 PM »

roja ji,

very touching and very well written.


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diya786

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Re: *Dead Existence*

«Reply #5 on: April 14, 2008, 07:06:57 AM »

very nice words to express innermost thoughts
really very impressive


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honeyrose

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Re: *Dead Existence*

«Reply #6 on: April 14, 2008, 07:10:50 AM »

Very nice lines Roja dear.. Usual Smile


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no_good_stranger

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Re: *Dead Existence*

«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2008, 10:07:32 AM »

breaking up is never easy,but its harder when you feel that no matter how much you put in,you are made to feel that your existence,the bond,the time,the surpport is all worthless.
Very well written