DEATH

by vinery on May 17, 2015, 09:27:22 AM
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"He peeped through the window,
On his victim keeping an eye,
It was a dreary day and
Angels were fluttering by,
Pale and grizzled sufferer lying down,
He looked at him with a knowing frown,
Enjoying the look of pain on his face,
He doubled his pace & took him in embrace,
Leading the poor soul astray,
He finally took him away."
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«Reply #1 on: May 17, 2015, 09:58:11 AM »
Quote from: vinery on May 17, 2015, 09:27:22 AM
"He peeped through the window,
On his victim keeping an eye,
It was a dreary day and
Angels were fluttering by,
Pale and grizzled sufferer lying down,
He looked at him with a knowing frown,
Enjoying the look of pain on his face,
He doubled his pace & took him in embrace,
Leading the poor soul astray,
He finally took him away."

Ms.vinery,
         nice composition..........a "rau" for it.Thaaaaaaaaaanks to Almighty I was not a victim while  every body has to encounter it.
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«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2015, 09:59:46 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2015, 10:04:18 AM »
Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on May 17, 2015, 09:58:11 AM
Ms.vinery,
         nice composition..........a "rau" for it.Thaaaaaaaaaanks to Almighty I was not a victim while  every body has to encounter it.
Thank you so much.
But didn't get the second sentence.
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2015, 10:05:24 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 17, 2015, 09:59:46 AM
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2015, 10:39:22 AM »
nice creation
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«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2015, 03:18:13 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2015, 03:39:50 PM »
Quote from: vinery on May 17, 2015, 09:27:22 AM
"He peeped through the window,
On his victim keeping an eye,
It was a dreary day and
Angels were fluttering by,
Pale and grizzled sufferer lying down,
He looked at him with a knowing frown,
Enjoying the look of pain on his face,
He doubled his pace & took him in embrace,
Leading the poor soul astray,
He finally took him away."

good narration and imagination ,ma'am
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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2015, 08:31:43 PM »
 Beautiful and stunning.
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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2015, 10:32:19 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2015, 01:56:33 AM »
Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on May 17, 2015, 03:39:50 PM
good narration and imagination ,ma'am
Thank you.
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«Reply #11 on: May 18, 2015, 01:57:30 AM »
Thank you so much everyone.
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«Reply #12 on: May 18, 2015, 10:49:01 AM »
very very nice  waaaahhhhh keep writing
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«Reply #13 on: May 18, 2015, 03:23:33 PM »
Quote from: jeet jainam on May 18, 2015, 10:49:01 AM
very very nice  waaaahhhhh keep writing
Thank you so much.
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