dedicated to our parents......

by mili_genie on March 16, 2006, 01:56:10 PM
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Nind apni bhula kar sulaya hamko
Ansu apne girakar hasaya hamko
Dardkabhi na dena us khuda ki tasweer ko
Khuda bhi kehte hai maa baap jisko



Not mind....
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2006, 02:07:45 PM »
Very Nice Vir...This thread reminded me about one of my poem on parents, that i wrote long back but never posted before..so writing over here !!!

Maa baap ki duaaon me hi bachchon ki kaamyaabi hai
Unki duaaon ne hi har imtihaan ko aasaan banaya hai

Dekhna bhoole se bhi na dil dukh jaaye unka kabhi
Unko khush kar ke hi aulaad ne har khushi ko paya hai

Panv tale Jannat hai aur jannat ka bhi darr wahin
Khuda taala ne apne bandon se ye farmaaya hai

Ikhtilaaf hote hain aur generation gap naam dete hain
Par unke tajurbon ne hi har mushkil se hume bachaya hai

Baap ki shaffaqt ka nahin hai is dunya main mol koi
Maa ke aanchal main Khuda ne kaainat ko chupaya hai
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Rajbir
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2006, 02:20:18 PM »
Vir and Talat

Thanks for posting such nice wordings in honour of our parents !

Rajbir
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: March 16, 2006, 02:45:15 PM »
Shukriya Rajbir....This poem i consider my best writing coz its on parents Usual Smile
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mili_genie
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«Reply #4 on: March 16, 2006, 03:18:14 PM »
ya offcours sis... really its too amazing + mindblowing with blasting.... i just go for clappinga....really too good.. ever for ever..... Usual Smile

thanx raj bhaiya....
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: March 16, 2006, 03:23:03 PM »
wah bahoot khoob Talat bahoot hi acha likha hai... Good post Mili!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: March 16, 2006, 03:43:57 PM »
Thanks so much Vir and Pooja..I did nt know it will be liked so much :D
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mili_genie
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2006, 05:30:27 PM »
thanx pooja ji..

another one is added i got in a mail..... dedicated for my family...


Family is there for you in a jiffy.

Inquires about why you are looking bad or spiffy.

Loves you unconditionally.

And gives you advice typically.

Will defend you in a heartbeat.

And tell you what to do about your stinky feet.

May get on your nerves at times.

And even makes you laugh at stupid jokes sometimes.

With family you share a history.

The bonds you share are no mystery.

I promise I'll be there when you need me.

Because that is how family should be.
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: March 16, 2006, 06:22:41 PM »
good one mili!!
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Bharat
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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2006, 02:55:04 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Very Nice Vir...This thread reminded me about one of my poem on parents, that i wrote long back but never posted before..so writing over here !!!

Maa baap ki duaaon me hi bachchon ki kaamyaabi hai
Unki duaaon ne hi har imtihaan ko aasaan banaya hai

Dekhna bhoole se bhi na dil dukh jaaye unka kabhi
Unko khush kar ke hi aulaad ne har khushi ko paya hai

Panv tale Jannat hai aur jannat ka bhi darr wahin
Khuda taala ne apne bandon se ye farmaaya hai

Ikhtilaaf hote hain aur generation gap naam dete hain
Par unke tajurbon ne hi har mushkil se hume bachaya hai

Baap ki shaffaqt ka nahin hai is dunya main mol koi
Maa ke aanchal main Khuda ne kaainat ko chupaya hai



Hi mili,
Very good one...!!!
jiski bhi hai, bohot achchi hai...........

Hi Talat,
wonderful poem......Bohot hi achcha likha hai   !!!
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mili_genie
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2006, 05:46:14 AM »
thanx bharat ji...
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Talat
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«Reply #11 on: March 18, 2006, 12:31:37 PM »
Thanks Bharat for the appreciation Usual Smile

Very nice Vir Usual Smile
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