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by shabnam1801 on January 13, 2009, 02:58:07 PM

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shabnam1801

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Dekha jo us roz muskura ke,
Phr umer bhar rulaya us roz ki hasi ne......


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Roja

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Re: dhokha

«Reply #1 on: January 13, 2009, 03:20:02 PM »

hmm nice start... toda adhuri sa laga... maine 4 line add kiya hai.
Hope you wont mind.
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Dekha jo us roz muskura ke
Phir umer ber rulaya us roz ki hassi ne..

Elan-e-jang hai zamane mein
Dunia lagi hai mujhe mitane mein

Yu toh sabhi bewafa hai zamane mein
Aisi dunia se "Roja" tera rishta kya hai?


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cara

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Re: dhokha

«Reply #2 on: January 13, 2009, 03:38:09 PM »

kya baat hai...shabnamji....

kash us roz use dekhkar,muskurakar moka nadiya hota,
kash usne umer bar rulane ka, dhokha na diya hota.


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Pooja

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Re: dhokha

«Reply #3 on: January 13, 2009, 04:23:26 PM »

bahoot khoob shabnam ji, apka yoindia main swagat hai.

Nice addition Roja

Good lines cara ji


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: dhokha

«Reply #4 on: January 13, 2009, 07:09:10 PM »

Nice lines Shabnam Ji
Welcome to yoindia


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: dhokha

«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2009, 08:28:03 AM »

well said Shabnam and good continuation Roja and cara


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Roja

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Re: dhokha

«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2009, 11:56:32 AM »

Thanks Pooja didi and Sajid ji


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