~*~ For you my friend ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on December 21, 2010, 03:59:34 PM
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Yeh poem meri ek khaas dost kay liye likh raha hoon..

In my sight of life,
I see empty horizons,
With no one walking alongside me,
Except my shadow and my Lord,
But tearing this darkness apart,
Is the light your heart possesses,
That brightens my path,
In one way or another,
Rather in everyway possible,
Sharing with you lightens me,
Talking to you brightens me,
Fear of losing you frightens me,
But I’m assured I have you,
I’m convinced I’ll always do,
In those memories we shared,
In the moments we treasured,
In the words we exchanged,
in every moment ‘you’ and ‘I’ were ‘we’..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #1 on: December 22, 2010, 09:22:28 AM »
very touchy lines rahim ji...
specially d last one....
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AbhiTamrakar
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«Reply #2 on: December 22, 2010, 09:47:03 AM »
verry verry ice..

some things felt in the heart while reading to last line..

awesome words but somewhere there is a need for revision; so as i think is not actually needed..

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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2010, 05:14:11 PM »
Good one Rahim Ji
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dead heart
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2010, 07:16:49 PM »
very touchy lines rahim ji...
specially d last one....
Shukriya jee..
Teh dil se..
Khush rahiye..

verry verry ice..

some things felt in the heart while reading to last line..

awesome words but somewhere there is a need for revision; so as i think is not actually needed..
Shukriya Abhi bhai..
Ap jaise shayar tariff karlein, toh hausla milta hai..
bahaut bahaut shukriya..
Khush rahiye..

Good one Rahim Ji
Teh dil se shukriya jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2010, 10:12:07 AM »
Bahut Khub Rahim JI
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dead heart
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«Reply #6 on: December 23, 2010, 12:58:13 PM »
Shukriya Rishi jee..!
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