His Kiss

by jatti_80 on March 08, 2008, 09:01:28 AM

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jatti_80

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Post modified by Yoindia Monitor Talat.

Reason: Explicit and vulgar.

Suggestion: Please do not post anything which shows vulgarity. We wlecome you to write here your poems which we can appreciate.

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Re: His Kiss

«Reply #1 on: March 08, 2008, 09:17:56 AM »

Very nice lines jatti.. Usual Smile


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Roja

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Re: His Kiss

«Reply #2 on: March 11, 2008, 01:54:59 AM »

Mr Jatti,
Sorry to say..

I think you eloborate sensitive love in all your poems, which i felt vulgar while reading.


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jatti_80

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Re: His Kiss

«Reply #3 on: March 11, 2008, 09:42:43 PM »

Well im sorry if u didnt like it but i jus wrote wat i felt n i really dont think there was anything in this poem by which any1 should be offended!!!!but its ur opinion n then at da same time no1s that innocent that would feel offened by it!!!!!!!!