His Kiss

by jatti_80 on March 08, 2008, 09:01:28 AM
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Reason: Explicit and vulgar.

Suggestion: Please do not post anything which shows vulgarity. We wlecome you to write here your poems which we can appreciate.

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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: March 08, 2008, 09:17:56 AM »
Very nice lines jatti..Usual Smile
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: March 11, 2008, 01:54:59 AM »
Mr Jatti,
Sorry to say..

I think you eloborate sensitive love in all your poems, which i felt vulgar while reading.
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jatti_80
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«Reply #3 on: March 11, 2008, 09:42:43 PM »
Well im sorry if u didnt like it but i jus wrote wat i felt n i really dont think there was anything in this poem by which any1 should be offended!!!!but its ur opinion n then at da same time no1s that innocent that would feel offened by it!!!!!!!!
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