..~~i am left alone in pain~~..

by HumTum on July 18, 2005, 10:41:30 AM
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A part of me dies as the pain flows in to my heart
I can feel our love being drained from deep within
Its so hard to hold on as we softly drift apart
I'd give all i have to get it back again

In the begining when our love was brand new
The feelings we shared made our world seem bright
Two could have shared no greater love
We really believe that what we had been really right

As time went by, doubts of our love came
And sorrow began to consume my every thought
I knew in my heart life would never be the same
For i was loosing that which for so long i sought

I tried in vain to keep our love alive
But reality came and throught my heart it tore
Now I'm left just praying that I'll survive
Cause its up to you, its in my hands no more

Left your love, I don't know if i can live
I search deep in my soul, looking for a glimmer of hope
But love has left me empty; I have nothing else to give
I am left alone in pain, trying to find a way to cope
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dolly
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«Reply #1 on: July 18, 2005, 10:45:42 AM »
very very touching Hum Tum.........really really nice..................
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Tosha
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«Reply #2 on: July 18, 2005, 10:52:46 AM »
hey..!!!
...
This was never how it was ment to be
you know it better what did we feel
you are driffting apart you are breaking my heart
still in our love do i believe

no matter how far you may go
i'll be right here waithing gor you
i know in my arms you'll feel the love
i know you love me too

like the barrel land our feelings seem
but there wont be dry for long
there will be sunshine and little rain
and we will be together after the pain

you wont ever bring me disgrace
you dont want tears on my face
no matter all hard things you say or do
i'll be right hear waithing for you
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«Reply #3 on: July 18, 2005, 10:53:04 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
A part of me dies as the pain flows in to my heart
I can feel our love being drained from deep within
Its so hard to hold on as we softly drift apart
I'd give all i have to get it back again

In the begining when our love was brand new
The feelings we shared made our world seem bright
Two could have shared no greater love
We really believe that what we had been really right

As time went by, doubts of our love came
And sorrow began to consume my every thought
I knew in my heart life would never be the same
For i was loosing that which for so long i sought

I tried in vain to keep our love alive
But reality came and throught my heart it tore
Now I'm left just praying that I'll survive
Cause its up to you, its in my hands no more

Left your love, I don't know if i can live
I search deep in my soul, looking for a glimmer of hope
But love has left me empty; I have nothing else to give
I am left alone in pain, trying to find a way to cope


bohat acche humtum,lots of pain in ur words .
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HumTum
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«Reply #4 on: July 18, 2005, 03:30:15 PM »
Thanx a lot Dolly , Nidhi n Popat
n nice one Popat will be back with my answer  Puzzled !
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2005, 04:51:22 PM »
wah wah humtum ji...bohot hi acha likha hai!!!!! made me  sad5

toshuuuuu kuddiye!!!!!! too gud as well!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2005, 05:16:12 PM »
nice tosha ji .......Hum tum Ji you are marvelous with your thoughts with this exclusive art....waah....
here is one......a try


The Milk Of Love

Let us enjoy
The milk of love;
Doesn’t matter
Whosoever comes and serves.
The pages we write,
In love we play,
Each moment we enjoy,
With them we stay.
Every reveling moment pushes us
To the extreme of ecstasy;
We can’t even dare
To withdraw ourselves
From this known fantasy.
Death or lunacy
Sometimes is
The result
At last.
Love is here
To engulf
The lovers very fast.


~~~~*HARASH MAHAJAN*©~~~~
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Tosha
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«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2005, 05:16:25 PM »
Thanx Pheeke Gunde ... n ... Meena JI
................................................. ......................
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HumTum
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«Reply #8 on: July 20, 2005, 01:39:26 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
wah wah humtum ji...bohot hi acha likha hai!!!!! made me  sad5

toshuuuuu kuddiye!!!!!! too gud as well!!!!!!!!!

 :D


sachiii sad5
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pandit
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«Reply #9 on: July 20, 2005, 01:44:59 PM »
sahi hai hum tum nji.............................................. ...
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roshni246
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«Reply #10 on: April 11, 2006, 01:03:52 PM »
Let us say good bye
Before it starts to hurt,
Before it really stings
Let us make our peace
Before it tears apart
Before the hate begins

I'll let go of dreams
You let go of plans
We'll let go of yesterday
And each others' hands

Let us cure the heartbreak
Before it spreads some more
Before it further disburses
Let us say good bye
To this ill-mannered love
Before it really hurts (nm)

~roshni~
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nikki
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«Reply #11 on: April 11, 2006, 01:07:31 PM »
too gud all of u...
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KaMaL
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«Reply #12 on: October 15, 2006, 08:17:22 AM »
Quote from: "HumTum"
A part of me dies as the pain flows in to my heart
I can feel our love being drained from deep within
Its so hard to hold on as we softly drift apart
I'd give all i have to get it back again

In the begining when our love was brand new
The feelings we shared made our world seem bright
Two could have shared no greater love
We really believe that what we had been really right

As time went by, doubts of our love came
And sorrow began to consume my every thought
I knew in my heart life would never be the same
For i was loosing that which for so long i sought

I tried in vain to keep our love alive
But reality came and throught my heart it tore
Now I'm left just praying that I'll survive
Cause its up to you, its in my hands no more

Left your love, I don't know if i can live
I search deep in my soul, looking for a glimmer of hope
But love has left me empty; I have nothing else to give
I am left alone in pain, trying to find a way to cope


very nice
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paani
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2007, 11:37:44 AM »
HUM TUM.. n tosha nice work
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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #14 on: September 15, 2007, 09:29:45 AM »
Said but true,like they say 'thats how the cookie crumbles'.Very well done
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