I am with you

by suman59 on July 29, 2012, 12:50:18 AM
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Author  (Read 1342 times)
suman59
Guest
When loneliness comes to you think of me
When you feel sad remember I'm here
And do anything to see you happy
When you feel happy
Do not forget that my greatest joy is to see your smile ...



Logged
mkv
Guest
«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2012, 12:59:05 AM »
Beautiful..
Amazing. very nice.
Applause Applause

looks like i am dreaming.
found happiness..n. screaming
people shocked at me and
their eyes screaning.
Logged
suman59
Guest
«Reply #2 on: July 29, 2012, 01:06:54 AM »
Beautiful..
Amazing. very nice.
Applause Applause

looks like i am dreaming.
found happiness..n. screaming
people shocked at me and
their eyes screaning.


When love is
is present, there is nothing
prevents it from happening ...
Love is sober in the extreme,
nothing to crazy
justify it ...
Anyone who doubts
the power of love ...
Logged
mkv
Guest
«Reply #3 on: July 29, 2012, 01:16:33 AM »
When love is
is present, there is nothing
prevents it from happening ...
Love is sober in the extreme,
nothing to crazy
justify it ...
Anyone who doubts
the power of love ...


The love .
this experience is eternal
presentation is external
pain or sorrow, whatever you feel
that is individual's internal
Logged
suman59
Guest
«Reply #4 on: July 29, 2012, 01:19:45 AM »
The love .
this experience is eternal
presentation is external
pain or sorrow, whatever you feel
that is individual's internal


When love to address your
heart know to ensure such
gift.
For that is the heart of all
Because of our lives
seeking housing in your life! ..
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #5 on: July 29, 2012, 01:53:59 AM »
BEAUTIFUL
Logged
shaukeen
Guest
«Reply #6 on: July 29, 2012, 03:07:10 AM »
Bahut acche
Logged
Aarish
Guest
«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2012, 03:08:23 AM »
Very nice creation ma'm,  its beautifull
Logged
soudagar
Guest
«Reply #8 on: July 29, 2012, 03:28:18 AM »
beautiful words.......
Logged
saahill
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 86
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
147 days, 17 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 18610
Member Since: Jun 2009


View Profile
«Reply #9 on: July 29, 2012, 03:43:31 AM »
woww nice lines
Logged
khamosh_aawaaz
Guest
«Reply #10 on: July 29, 2012, 06:22:00 AM »
When loneliness comes to you think of me
When you feel sad remember I'm here
And do anything to see you happy
When you feel happy
Do not forget that my greatest joy is to see your smile ...




naaaaaaaaice.!!

              keep on smiling it improves your face value
Logged
Asif samani jaunpuri
Guest
«Reply #11 on: July 29, 2012, 09:37:47 AM »
Thodi si smile hame bhi do plz nani  over all nice poem
Logged
roy
Guest
«Reply #12 on: July 29, 2012, 11:46:44 AM »
beautiful lines filled with feelings Usual Smile Usual Smile
 
bought a smile on my face
this is an example that making your poetry rhyme i not necessary alway all u have do is pen it down with with feelings Usual Smile

thanks aunty g Usual Smile
Logged
suman59
Guest
«Reply #13 on: July 29, 2012, 02:35:08 PM »
BEAUTIFUL

thanks dr jee
Logged
suman59
Guest
«Reply #14 on: July 29, 2012, 02:35:36 PM »
Bahut acche

shukriya shaukeen jee
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 04:28:32 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]

[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]

by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.095 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer