I hate the feeling called "Love"

by Bhupinder Kaur on June 25, 2013, 12:54:59 AM
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Relations made me weak
Emotions made me sick
I hate the feeling called "Love"
As it bend me 2my knees.
Time has given me a tight slap
Destiny have shown me the place
Where I have 2b
Distances can b covered
& limits can b crossed
But can't force a person
To "LOVE ME"



Weeping is all I can do
Sleepless night goes
While thinking abut u
No matter, what the circumstances
I m going thro'
But not for a second
You were out of mind too

Holding pillow tight in my arms
Imagining its u making me warm
No dreams I want to see
Just want "You to be with Me"
Smile, 4a while do appear
But only loneliness I cheer

I love the way sunrise
Without having u, my beside
But still loving u inside.
Doesn't matter where you are
B'cos every second my feelings
Rushes 2reach u there

I hate the feeling called "Love"
As Still breathes & Speaks
U & Me are & always will be

 "WE" forever...............
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RAJAN KONDAL
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2013, 01:20:48 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2013, 01:26:28 AM »
Relations made me weak
Emotions made me sick
I hate the feeling called "Love"
As it bend me 2my knees.
Time has given me a tight slap
Destiny have shown me the place
Where I have 2b
Distances can b covered
& limits can b crossed
But can't force a person
To "LOVE ME"

something very extraordinary.
the way you describe the feelings..virtually a art..
Really amazing..wonderful creation.

but later on it changes..the very theme ?
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2013, 01:41:32 AM »
Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on June 25, 2013, 12:54:59 AM
Relations made me weak
Emotions made me sick
I hate the feeling called "Love"
As it bend me 2my knees.
Time has given me a tight slap
Destiny have shown me the place
Where I have 2b
Distances can b covered
& limits can b crossed
But can't force a person
To "LOVE ME"



Weeping is all I can do
Sleepless night goes
While thinking abut u
No matter, what the circumstances
I m going thro'
But not for a second
You were out of mind too

Holding pillow tight in my arms
Imagining its u making me warm
No dreams I want to see
Just want "You to be with Me"
Smile, 4a while do appear
But only loneliness I cheer

I love the way sunrise
Without having u, my beside
But still loving u inside.
Doesn't matter where you are
B'cos every second my feelings
Rushes 2reach u there

I hate the feeling called "Love"
As Still breathes & Speaks
U & Me are & always will be

 "WE" forever...............


Gud!! May Be Some One Hurt You But...
Love Is Always Great!!!!
Without Love There Is No Life,
So Believe In Love,
Love Is Trust,Love Is Faith,Love Is Life...
Prem Insaan Ko Insaaniyat Sikhata Hai.
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2013, 08:12:54 AM »
NICE ONE........ Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2013, 09:09:04 AM »
good one
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«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2013, 12:22:57 PM »
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Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on June 25, 2013, 12:54:59 AM
Relations made me weak
Emotions made me sick
I hate the feeling called "Love"
As it bend me 2my knees.
Time has given me a tight slap
Destiny have shown me the place
Where I have 2b
Distances can b covered
& limits can b crossed
But can't force a person
To "LOVE ME"



Weeping is all I can do
Sleepless night goes
While thinking abut u
No matter, what the circumstances
I m going thro'
But not for a second
You were out of mind too

Holding pillow tight in my arms
Imagining its u making me warm
No dreams I want to see
Just want "You to be with Me"
Smile, 4a while do appear
But only loneliness I cheer

I love the way sunrise
Without having u, my beside
But still loving u inside.
Doesn't matter where you are
B'cos every second my feelings
Rushes 2reach u there

I hate the feeling called "Love"
As Still breathes & Speaks
U & Me are & always will be

 "WE" forever...............




 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

  LOVE IS AN UNWANTED SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEET PAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  AND IT REMAINS UNHEALED LIFE LONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

   
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2013, 12:29:29 PM »
Quote from: mkv on June 25, 2013, 01:26:28 AM
Relations made me weak
Emotions made me sick
I hate the feeling called "Love"
As it bend me 2my knees.
Time has given me a tight slap
Destiny have shown me the place
Where I have 2b
Distances can b covered
& limits can b crossed
But can't force a person
To "LOVE ME"

something very extraordinary.
the way you describe the feelings..virtually a art..
Really amazing..wonderful creation.

but later on it changes..the very theme ?






Thanks A lot Sirji, & i always prefer to go with flow of my feelings, whatever it may be, if i tries to against the tide, my words die...
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2013, 12:31:17 PM »
Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on June 25, 2013, 12:54:59 AM
Relations made me weak
Emotions made me sick
I hate the feeling called "Love"
As it bend me 2my knees.
Time has given me a tight slap
Destiny have shown me the place
Where I have 2b
Distances can b covered
& limits can b crossed
But can't force a person
To "LOVE ME"



Weeping is all I can do
Sleepless night goes
While thinking abut u
No matter, what the circumstances
I m going thro'
But not for a second
You were out of mind too

Holding pillow tight in my arms
Imagining its u making me warm
No dreams I want to see
Just want "You to be with Me"
Smile, 4a while do appear
But only loneliness I cheer

I love the way sunrise
Without having u, my beside
But still loving u inside.
Doesn't matter where you are
B'cos every second my feelings
Rushes 2reach u there

I hate the feeling called "Love"
As Still breathes & Speaks
U & Me are & always will be

 "WE" forever...............



Justttttttttt Beutiful As Always Bhupinder Ji..

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But Love Is The Only Thing That Keep's People Alive... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2013, 12:54:50 PM »
Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on June 25, 2013, 01:20:48 AM
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Quote from: qalb on June 25, 2013, 12:22:57 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

  LOVE IS AN UNWANTED SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEET PAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  AND IT REMAINS UNHEALED LIFE LONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

   


Quote from: Miru;;;; on June 25, 2013, 08:12:54 AM
NICE ONE........ Applause Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on June 25, 2013, 01:41:32 AM
Gud!! May Be Some One Hurt You But...
Love Is Always Great!!!!
Without Love There Is No Life,
So Believe In Love,
Love Is Trust,Love Is Faith,Love Is Life...
Prem Insaan Ko Insaaniyat Sikhata Hai.
Quote from: khwahish on June 25, 2013, 12:31:17 PM
Justttttttttt Beutiful As Always Bhupinder Ji..

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  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

But Love Is The Only Thing That Keep's People Alive... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
THANK YOU ALL, FOR UR VALUABLE TIME & COMMENTS.
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2013, 12:59:52 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on June 25, 2013, 09:09:04 AM
good one
THANK U SIR JI
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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2013, 01:37:16 PM »
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Weeping is all I can do
Sleepless night goes
While thinking abut u
No matter, what the circumstances
I m going thro'
But not for a second
You were out of mind too

Holding pillow tight in my arms
Imagining its u making me warm
No dreams I want to see
Just want "You to be with Me"
Smile, 4a while do appear
But only loneliness I cheer
very nice emotions and feelings bhupinder ji.
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nashwani
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«Reply #12 on: June 25, 2013, 01:43:16 PM »
beautiful as alwayz..emotional as alwayz..heart touching as alwayz..happy9
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«Reply #13 on: June 26, 2013, 03:32:17 AM »
awesome poetry!

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«Reply #14 on: June 27, 2013, 02:58:43 AM »
Quote from: @Kaash on June 26, 2013, 03:32:17 AM
awesome poetry!

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