I heard her panting heart in me!:English

abdbundeli

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I took her hand!

She gave,
But hesitatingly!

It moistened:
Moistened fast lately!

I heard her panting heart in me!

She kept on looking: at her feet!
I’m proud:
I have some-one, so sweet!

I may not sleep tonight, it seems!

Oh Love!
Are you, all waking dreams?

She’s far away!
She’s far away!!
She loves me:
For, she loves none-else!
Her lovely eyes: are full of love!
Her hands: are silky-soft!
She’s a dove!

She says:
‘Beauties must have tough cores:
Fortunes are safe, in locked-up doors!’

Now, know: what I’m feeling, for long;
That hums in me, like drones, in song!

‘I have discovered you, in me!

Now,
Let me watch your eyes!
They’re deep!

I long,
To find, in them,
My dear!
At what great depth,
Now, I belong!’

••••
G.R.Prakash


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Sonia01

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Re: I heard her panting heart in me!

«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2008, 06:10:16 PM »

Very Good Mr Prakash


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Pooja

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Re: I heard her panting heart in me!

«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2008, 08:50:32 PM »

bahoot khoob Prakash jee!!


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syednaami

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Re: I heard her panting heart in me!

«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2008, 09:46:26 PM »

Excellent work Prakash saahib,,, Truly remarkable...


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prmchawla

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Re: I heard her panting heart in me!

«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2008, 04:47:36 AM »

Prakash Babu very nice dear great creation yaar


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abdbundeli

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Re: I heard her panting heart in me!

«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2008, 12:14:15 PM »

Sonia01 ji / Pooja ji / syednaami ji / prmchawla ji!

I'm happy that my poem has delighted,
Peoples of your stature and your fame!
I'm old but not a 'zayif', as my young heart,
Likes to dwell with young persons of some NAME!

Thanks for all your sweet words!

- G.R.Prakash/abd bundeli


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syednaami

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Re: I heard her panting heart in me!

«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2008, 04:07:50 PM »

I am very glad that you made me so honored here...
You are a great person...


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Roja

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Re: I heard her panting heart in me!

«Reply #7 on: July 27, 2008, 11:53:36 AM »

Your poem made me too delighted Mr Prakash... Good work


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abdbundeli

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Re: I heard her panting heart in me!

«Reply #8 on: July 27, 2008, 01:31:57 PM »

Roja ji,

How should I thank you, my dear! I know not!
Its your sweet mind and heart that discovers much;
In simple and sweet words that speak so lot:
One poet, well, knows another poet fast;
This's all what I can say in this sweet moment!
Read a few more poems, and discover me more!

Thanks a lot once again!

G.R.Prakash / abdbundeli


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Kamusta

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Re: I heard her panting heart in me!

«Reply #9 on: July 14, 2009, 07:35:28 AM »

I like it. Indeed it's deep.


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abdbundeli

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Re: I heard her panting heart in me!

«Reply #10 on: July 14, 2009, 08:20:50 AM »

Quote from: syednaami on June 21, 2008, 04:07:50 PM

I am very glad that you made me so honored here...
You are a great person...

Thanks you, for all your so sweet words,
Mr. syednaami!
- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: I heard her panting heart in me!

«Reply #11 on: July 14, 2009, 08:23:10 AM »

Quote from: Kamusta on July 14, 2009, 07:35:28 AM

I like it. Indeed it's deep.

Thanks a lot, Kamusta ji!
- abd bundeli


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madhuwesh

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Re: I heard her panting heart in me!

«Reply #12 on: July 14, 2009, 09:25:18 AM »

Wah Abd ji,kamaal ka likha aapne,very nice and wonderful creation,excellent. icon_thumleft


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abdbundeli

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Re: I heard her panting heart in me!

«Reply #13 on: July 14, 2009, 09:35:14 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on July 14, 2009, 09:25:18 AM

Wah Abd ji,kamaal ka likha aapne,very nice and wonderful creation,excellent. icon_thumleft

Shukriyah Madhu!
- abd bundeli


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: I heard her panting heart in me!

«Reply #14 on: March 13, 2010, 03:05:41 PM »

GOOD MR. PRAKASH JI. icon_flower


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