~~I Love You~~

by honeyrose on October 30, 2008, 02:26:05 PM
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«Reply #30 on: November 08, 2008, 05:35:03 PM »
I love you cross my heart
Depth of my heart longs for you

I love you more then myself
you’re the shining star beneath my heart

I need you more close to me my love
My heart keeps longing for tender moment

Which we use to share a one special love
You ask me why since we should part

Bring back the past moments which we wish for  
I will be the only one who will pick the pieces for broken heart

_________honeyrose_____________


Very Nice work Honey Sis ...Please keep writing Usual Smile
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«Reply #31 on: November 08, 2008, 08:24:42 PM »
rhymes dnt determine a good or bad poem...u rote well..dats it...ur feelings wer expressed n dont eva say sry...not to anyone...no one is perfect...im sry everythin started coz of my comment...SORRY...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #32 on: November 09, 2008, 03:54:42 AM »
rhymes dnt determine a good or bad poem...u rote well..dats it...ur feelings wer expressed n dont eva say sry...not to anyone...no one is perfect...im sry everythin started coz of my comment...SORRY...

Its ok D heart lets forget all this and cheer up no dont feel
its because of your comments and dont say sorry too
in life we all have to accept negative and positive coments
be happy..thanks... hello
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«Reply #33 on: November 09, 2008, 03:57:10 AM »
Modification means some rytham i said dear.
Dont take it to yr heart. Lines are created
by you wonderfully. It is true and not SYMPATHY ok.

Sonia thanks for your appreciation but
i would recommend lets drop the topic here
and i dont take things to heart am practical
thanks...
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«Reply #34 on: November 09, 2008, 03:57:46 AM »
Very Nice work Honey Sis ...Please keep writing Usual Smile

Thank you Celmira Sis... notworthy
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