I Need You Now

by suman59 on August 26, 2012, 06:28:02 PM
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I Need You Now
My friend, I need you now-
Please take me by the hand.
Stand by me in my hour of need,
Take time to understand.
Take my hand, dear friend,
And lead me from this place.
Chase away my doubts and fears,
Wipe the tears from off my face.
Friend, I cannot stand alone.
I need your hand to hold,
The warmth of your gentle touch
In my world that’s grown so cold.
Please be a friend to me
And hold me day by day.
Because with your loving hand in mine,
I know we’ll find the way.
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2012, 06:39:27 PM »
bahut achhe suman ji,
though my English is not up to the mark but this seems very beautiful expressions.congratulations
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2012, 12:27:42 AM »
Nice Suman ji, english poetry is also marvellous, enjoy the life
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2012, 04:31:12 AM »
very nice. Suman Ji
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2012, 04:34:37 AM »
Great hame aapkaa friend bannaa achhaa lagaa
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«Reply #5 on: August 27, 2012, 09:39:09 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2012, 10:04:53 AM »
Quote from: suman59 on August 26, 2012, 06:28:02 PM
I Need You Now
My friend, I need you now-
Please take me by the hand.
Stand by me in my hour of need,
Take time to understand.
Take my hand, dear friend,
And lead me from this place.
Chase away my doubts and fears,
Wipe the tears from off my face.
Friend, I cannot stand alone.
I need your hand to hold,
The warmth of your gentle touch
In my world that’s grown so cold.
Please be a friend to me
And hold me day by day.
Because with your loving hand in mine,
I know we’ll find the way.

naaaaaaaaice. your writing style iz similar to william wordsworth. Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

but i intend to take the world on my stride
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2012, 03:40:05 PM »
Quote from: ahujagd on August 26, 2012, 06:39:27 PM
bahut achhe suman ji,
though my English is not up to the mark but this seems very beautiful expressions.congratulations
ghansham das ahuja

thanks for reading. (even my eng is also poor still I try  Giggle )
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2012, 03:40:44 PM »
Quote from: nandbahu on August 27, 2012, 12:27:42 AM
Nice Suman ji, english poetry is also marvellous, enjoy the life

thank you very much for yr kind appreciation nandbahu jee
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2012, 03:41:08 PM »
Quote from: Sanjeev kash on August 27, 2012, 04:31:12 AM
very nice. Suman Ji

thanks sanjeev jee
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2012, 03:41:51 PM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on August 27, 2012, 04:34:37 AM
Great hame aapkaa friend bannaa achhaa lagaa

ab tak friend bane nahi kya?  sad5
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2012, 03:42:12 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 27, 2012, 09:39:09 AM
Applause Applause Applause

 Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: August 27, 2012, 03:43:04 PM »
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 27, 2012, 10:04:53 AM
naaaaaaaaice. your writing style iz similar to william wordsworth. Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

but i intend to take the world on my stride

thank you very much
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