I wish I cud b there:English

Bhupinder Kaur

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I wish I cud b there
2bare
If u dare
2pour it out
The river of ur thoughts
Which is over & dwelling
Concealed in feelings pot
A touch of breeze
A wave of sea
Shaking it
Muffling it all alone
Going dumb stick
Shattering ur wings
Snuggling ur wounds
Sipping the knell
Baffling own self
Leaving the beautiful world
Worshiping weeping lake
Through night & day
Evaluating the profane oath
Thinking of the wheel
Which, churned in never-imagined way
& now silently counting
The no.s of breathes u inhales
For creation of life
Which is swiping u & ur world
In utter darkness & one side
I wish I cud b there
2efface it & 2let u know
I do care 4u & will be always by ur side
Till the moment I m alive……………..Ameen 15th Jan

I wish I cud be there
2hug u tight
2make everything light
2show u light
When day & night seems the same
All colors paints the black
Relation lacks warmth
Everything seems waste
Each moment losing the taste
Flowers blooming to tease
Songs pricking deep
Smile begins to ache
Tears mending up a lake
Feeling starts to tide
Thoughts blocking the mind
Loneliness filling all over
Emptiness lingering over & over
Only death can heal
As living is worst than hell
When ur soul speaks
“want to leave”
I wish, I cud b there
2say, give me all ur pain
Share it with me
If I cudnt do some thing or change
Jus a silent walk in ur talks
Had made me to read ur feeling
& holding my friend’s hand
To begin again
A beautiful life in another way
I wish, I cud b there
2shower my love on u
& yes I will there by ur side
4ever & ever
Till our fragrance is alive………Ameen

Hi all, & thanks 4reading this poem, as its based on my friend's life phase when things went out of her hand, unable to race & trace for creation of new life & jus silence & solitude took the stand.


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Re: I wish I cud b there

«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2013, 06:52:27 PM »

Beautiful thoughts and expression !


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jasbirsingh

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Re: I wish I cud b there

«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2013, 06:55:28 PM »

I wish i was there
to take you out
from the tears
you wear

i wish i was there
to give you warmth
from the fear
you wear

i wish i was there
to hold you tight
from the fears
you wear

i wish i was there
to bring the smile
from the sadness
you wear

i wish i was there
to tell you my dear
i am with you
everywhere u dare
i am with you
everywhere u dare .....

Bhupi ji ... u have written a very beautiful poem, the pain, the sadness, the sorrow ... so beautifully inscribed by you .... cheers, hats off to you and your poem ...

jasbir singh


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aqsh

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Re: I wish I cud b there

«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2013, 06:57:25 PM »

very touching bhupinder ji. loved to read it again and again...


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Re: I wish I cud b there

«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2013, 07:05:12 PM »

Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on June 15, 2013, 06:44:04 PM

I Have No Words For Appreciation..Touched My Heart To The Core..


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nashwani

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Re: I wish I cud b there

«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2013, 07:10:06 PM »

Simply beautiful..Realizing the pain of others nd feeling it is a quality..keep it up..nice writing..Very nice creation.. happy9


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@Kaash

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Re: I wish I cud b there

«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2013, 03:16:46 AM »

its amazingly written!


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Miru;;;;

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Re: I wish I cud b there

«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2013, 03:04:52 PM »

Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on June 15, 2013, 06:44:04 PM

NICE ONE...........!!


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Bhupinder Kaur

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Re: I wish I cud b there

«Reply #8 on: June 16, 2013, 09:13:53 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on June 15, 2013, 06:57:25 PM

very touching bhupinder ji. loved to read it again and again...

thanks 4ur appreciation aqshji


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Bhupinder Kaur

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Re: I wish I cud b there

«Reply #9 on: June 16, 2013, 09:15:05 PM »

Quote from: nashwani on June 15, 2013, 07:10:06 PM

Simply beautiful..Realizing the pain of others nd feeling it is a quality..keep it up..nice writing..Very nice creation.. happy9

Thank you so much.........


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Bhupinder Kaur

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Re: I wish I cud b there

«Reply #10 on: June 16, 2013, 09:16:26 PM »

Quote from: zarraa on June 15, 2013, 06:52:27 PM

Beautiful thoughts and expression !

Quote from: Miru;;;; on June 16, 2013, 03:04:52 PM

NICE ONE...........!!

Quote from: @Kaash on June 16, 2013, 03:16:46 AM

its amazingly written!

Quote from: khwahish on June 15, 2013, 07:05:12 PM

I Have No Words For Appreciation..Touched My Heart To The Core..

THANK YOU


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mkv

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Re: I wish I cud b there

«Reply #11 on: June 19, 2013, 05:24:08 PM »

Rocking thoughts.
humble approach..
beautiful feelings..
reflection of a true human being.


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