I'll lie to you.................................Quateel

by Quateel Ahmad on May 08, 2012, 12:07:19 PM
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I'll lie to you my sweet

right just the way you want me to

syrupy promises of eternal love

of flowers blooming and cooing doves


Your electric soft skin will not excite me

when you brush my arm not so accidently

swear by truth in all I will say

I'll mislead you about my aim intently


Not look at other women when you're there

in my mind i've stripped them bare

its a game we play you and i

perfection, deception and such feeling, flair


When after all we've both had our way

you can pretend my love was a deception tall

your heart's broken to bits you'll say

right then, another guy on the phone you'll call
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«Reply #1 on: May 08, 2012, 01:06:04 PM »
good
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«Reply #2 on: May 08, 2012, 01:53:26 PM »
Nice, beautiful creation.
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«Reply #3 on: May 08, 2012, 02:02:01 PM »
Beautiul depiction of human instincts . Bautiful  contrast of a biological
and  a  social  man . Superb  poetry !! Congrats !!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2012, 06:52:19 PM »
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Shukriya Saini bhai!
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«Reply #5 on: May 09, 2012, 09:56:05 PM »
Nice, beautiful creation.

Thank you Iftikhar sahab!
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2012, 05:44:08 AM »
Beautiul depiction of human instincts . Bautiful  contrast of a biological
and  a  social  man . Superb  poetry !! Congrats !!!


Much obliged Hasan Sahab for the encouragement and appreciation. 
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«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2012, 12:43:43 PM »
Congratulations ,

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«Reply #8 on: June 28, 2012, 05:55:26 AM »
Bohot khub......
Nice creation ahmad bhai......
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«Reply #9 on: June 30, 2012, 11:24:23 PM »
 Applause Applause
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