**I'm back alone**

by dead heart on May 07, 2009, 05:50:02 AM
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honeyrose
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«Reply #15 on: May 07, 2009, 12:32:43 PM »
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Beautifull peom Rahim g88 lines... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #16 on: May 07, 2009, 03:18:34 PM »
Rahim

Its an awesome poem you wrote !

may God bless you/.....Take care dear !
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Sadia Raja
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«Reply #17 on: May 07, 2009, 03:21:13 PM »
the tears i shed are just too painful,
they got out the love i had for her,
they left one thing in me for the world,
hatred and anger...

the tears came out showing just how much i loved her,
but they also showed just how much she played me,
they also show just how much the pain was she gave me,
the love i gave her became meaningless after she rejected it...

nothing was left for me to say,
after her rejection to my love that took over my soul,
she new thats the strongest part of my body,
she targeted the soul after shattering my heart...

she is a clever player,
she shattered my heart,
but wasn't successful enough to eliminate my soul from my body and break me down,
she will never do that as well as there is a better player on top of another one always...

whatever she did was for herself,
i don't blame her,
but whatever i did for her,
was like a lesson to me so that i never commit the mistake again...

but love is a mistake,
one has to repeat again and again,
it is part of life,
and one object has control over it; the heart...

i am back alone,
on that very dark life i started with,
i am not annoyed with what she did,
i blame myself for all this and most of all my fate...

i am back.
the destroyers mind is again in progress.
i don't want to break others as she broke me,
but she has certainly left me with no feelings forcing me to be the devil again...

life has opted that for me,
i will give it what it wants,
the love i had for her shall never back again,
but the pain she gave me shall always be remembered as a broken shattered heart and the scar seen on the broken pieces of my heart...



hmesha ki tarha bht achhe...hats off 2 u bhaiya...!!!bht khoob
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dead heart
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«Reply #18 on: May 07, 2009, 07:36:36 PM »
Wah DH kya kamal ka likhte ho yaar. man karta hai kho jao usme. Too good yaar.
Khojao Sophi di...Rahim ka maqsad hi yehi hai ke padne wale ko meri duniya main leke aun...

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Beautifull peom Rahim g88 lines... Thumbs UP
Rahim

Its an awesome poem you wrote !

may God bless you/.....Take care dear !



hmesha ki tarha bht achhe...hats off 2 u bhaiya...!!!bht khoob
Bahaut bahaut shukriya Jaya di, Talat di aur Sadia di...
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