Imagining Me & U

by Bhupinder Kaur on May 23, 2013, 02:22:51 AM
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Would it b, Sunrise in your eyes
  Or, Sunset in your arms
Wud words will b able 2fall
  Or jus conversation heart 2heart
Wud I will able 2look up  
  Or simply shy away
How I will hold my feelings
  If mischief air will hit me
After passing by thee
 Imagining how tht moment will b
If  you & me
  Will going 2meet…
Wud it b, jus like a dream come true
  Or thanking every second passing with u
How that glow will b???
  On my face, that  shine in my eyes,

Moisturizing my lips,
  Collapsing my breathe
Losing my innocence,
  Hiding my fear
Which wud raise my heartbeat
  2feel u deep within me
      Loving u!!!
So precious it wud be,
  Those few moments 4me
2xchange a smile,
  2share a warm hug, a tender kiss,
A gentle touch, echoing words though
  Being silent, flowing with emotions,
Unbelievable true
  2hav that  unforgettable feeling
If possible with u.........Ameen
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2013, 02:35:56 AM »
after a long time I have read something in English which is a sheer brilliance, I liked it all the way... Please do accept my congratulations and a rau too...
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2013, 02:42:19 AM »
after a long time I have read something in English which is a sheer brilliance, I liked it all the way... Please do accept my congratulations and a rau too...
Thanks 4ur appreciation & 4rau too.....
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2013, 03:43:30 AM »
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Nice Imagination Bhupinder jee..Nicely put up, i liked the flow..nd i hope deep 4m ma heart dat ur imagination may come true..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2013, 03:45:39 AM »
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Nice Imagination Bhupinder jee..Nicely put up, i liked the flow..nd i hope deep 4m ma heart dat ur imagination may come true..happy9
Thanks 4ur wishes dear.........
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2013, 09:20:48 AM »
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But!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Always Sunrise.......
Nice 1 Sis.
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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2013, 09:54:19 AM »
VERY..!!NICE..!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 23, 2013, 12:14:47 PM »
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how romantic and very very beautiful imagination. May all ur wishes come true.
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«Reply #8 on: May 23, 2013, 01:20:48 PM »
beautiful
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«Reply #9 on: May 23, 2013, 01:49:48 PM »
i just say.... wow....!!!
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«Reply #10 on: May 31, 2013, 02:52:05 PM »
Painful Words by a Girl, Must
Read:
I still remember your Last words :
Don't call me...
Don't text me...
Don't irritate me...
You know...
My heart was taken by you...
broken by you...
and now it is in pieces because of
you...
And still every single piece craves,
longs for you only...
Trust me baby I am going
through
hell...
I am suffering each and every
moment...
Why don't you see...
I want nothing at all from you,
All I ever wanted is, Only You...
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«Reply #11 on: May 31, 2013, 03:05:19 PM »
Would it b, Sunrise in your eyes
  Or, Sunset in your arms
Wud words will b able 2fall
  Or jus conversation heart 2heart
Wud I will able 2look up 
  Or simply shy away
How I will hold my feelings
  If mischief air will hit me
After passing by thee
 Imagining how tht moment will b
If  you & me
  Will going 2meet…
Wud it b, jus like a dream come true
  Or thanking every second passing with u
How that glow will b???
  On my face, that  shine in my eyes,

Moisturizing my lips,
  Collapsing my breathe
Losing my innocence,
  Hiding my fear
Which wud raise my heartbeat
  2feel u deep within me
      Loving u!!!
So precious it wud be,
  Those few moments 4me
2xchange a smile, 
  2share a warm hug, a tender kiss,
A gentle touch, echoing words though
  Being silent, flowing with emotions,
Unbelievable true
  2hav that  unforgettable feeling
If possible with u.........Ameen



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I Love Reading Your Poetries In English..i Have been Following Them..Plz Do Keeep Writing...


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