**In the middle of this graveyard** -Panna 2:English

honeyrose

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«Reply #15 on: March 15, 2009, 08:00:06 AM »

Very nice DH...


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dead heart

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Re: **In the middle of this graveyard**

«Reply #16 on: March 15, 2009, 11:53:23 AM »

Shukriya Jaya jee


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zama

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Re: **In the middle of this graveyard**

«Reply #17 on: March 15, 2009, 11:33:50 PM »

Quote from: dead heart on March 15, 2009, 07:51:31 AM

Well said Zama jee and well written as well...I understand wat u wanted to say..thanx for that litle piece of advice...

Quote from: dead heart on March 15, 2009, 07:48:23 AM

Shukriya Khwahish jee...
Zama jee u havent said alot and i dnt mind u saying anything...

Shukriya heart ji 'n thankz for the concern....'m overwhelmed


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zama

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Re: **In the middle of this graveyard**

«Reply #18 on: March 15, 2009, 11:35:14 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on March 15, 2009, 02:10:21 AM

Too Good Rahim & Equally Good Zama..

Thankz khwaish ji


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Roja

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Re: **In the middle of this graveyard**

«Reply #19 on: March 16, 2009, 02:30:18 AM »

Quote from: dead heart on March 12, 2009, 07:30:03 PM

Standing in the middle of this graveyard,
I admire leaves falling like my life did,
I feel rain drops pouring like my blood did,
I hear sounds of souls like I did when mine cried,
In the middle of this graveyard...

She deepened my heart in acid slowly by slowly,
Burnt it nicely while giving me a cursed smile,
I could still see hatred for me in her eyes,
And she said 'you made a mistake by loving me',
In the middle of this graveyard...

She cursed me with her love,
Blessed me with her hatred,
She prayes for a gift of death for me,
She buried my dreams and my heart alive,
In the middle of this graveyard...

-Burried Heart-

Each line touched my heart... Rahim ji... wonderful touching lines


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Roja

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Re: **In the middle of this graveyard**

«Reply #20 on: March 16, 2009, 02:31:40 AM »

Quote from: zama on March 13, 2009, 05:08:28 AM

May b u did'nt give time it'z pace
may b u tired off quickly from race
may b the bond was loosened from base
or the destiny may have changed itz phrase

what went wrong neither two of us know
only sorrows is what our fate bestowed
but still i keep my inner soul glow
when to graveyard my body slowed

Very good Zama ji


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zama

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«Reply #21 on: March 16, 2009, 04:25:41 AM »

Quote from: Roja on March 16, 2009, 02:31:40 AM

Very good Zama ji

Thankz ....Roja sis.....


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dead heart

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«Reply #22 on: March 16, 2009, 05:01:26 AM »

Quote from: Roja on March 16, 2009, 02:30:18 AM

Each line touched my heart... Rahim ji... wonderful touching lines

Thanx alot for appreciating my work Roja jee...


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