Irony.........Sps:English

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Irony

Yes...what's anxiously awaited
is also the first to vacate
Things most dear
in a fickle separate
What's in a veil
is the most desired beauty
All individual entities
unified by Irony

"You are the most beautiful"
you said so many times,
never thought you lied
'cause that night in flames
Me and our Love died
could never understand
how paper notes and metal coins
diminished my beauty in your eyes

"You are the strongest"
didn't knew strength flies
how I was made your weakness
on that flowery day of an expensive wedding
when you just cried...
the supposedly eternal bond
which never formed
no matter how hard you tried

"Stay like this, stay dear"
Stay childlike
So untrue was your belief
Now i know as your wife
You are busy, responsibilities spike
I grew up and you liked
Yes dear, you liked.....
No more childlike.....


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Re: Irony.........Sps

«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2016, 05:28:20 AM »

Nice emotion..


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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2016, 06:33:38 PM »

Thank you Arjun ji


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Re: Irony.........Sps

«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2016, 09:34:49 PM »

Very Very Nice, Beautiful, Elegant and Gorgious..... RAU later.
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2016, 12:45:42 AM »

Very nice


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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2016, 05:28:32 PM »

good sketch of imagination but there is no irony in it. just a feelings exhibited which can be varied from person to person ,nice depiction as per your perception one can feel it, sir keep it up bingo


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Re: Irony.........Sps

«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2016, 06:04:55 PM »

Quote from: surindarn on June 27, 2016, 09:34:49 PM

Very Very Nice, Beautiful, Elegant and Gorgious..... RAU later.
toothy4

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«Reply #7 on: June 29, 2016, 08:10:34 PM »

Thank u Surinderji.. Thank you wine ji... Thank u sooooo much maroon bahayaat ji... You are right when u say that feelings differ with people however the point that depicts and is ironical in the poem is clearly depicted in all the 3 stories dwscribes
1. What's most beautiful and important now for the man wanting to marry a woman (the woman and her beauty) and what becomes beautiful later ( money at the time of marriage) ..as per the person's convenience (stanza 2)
2. What was supposed to be strongest for a father becomes his greatest weakness at her marriage.. Which could not be performed due to dowry.. And what we think is an eternal Bond is so easy to break (stanza 3)
3. A man loves the innocence of his lover and requests to stay the same however the same thing for which he loved her is changed and the man loves the changed nature as per the requirement of time. (4th stanza)


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