Is This Love??? (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on February 15, 2007, 04:22:14 AM
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Can you Tell me Something,
Can you Just Tell me Why...
Why it Always Feels so Difficult,
To Bid you Good Bye..??

Why, Every time when we part,
I want to hold you Tight...
Deep Inside my Heart, And
Shut Closed in my Sight...

Why, That every Rose you gave,
I forever, want to Keep...
and Each Moment My love for you,
Becomes Deep Even Deep...

Why, My Soul feels your Touch,
And I felt so very Complete...
Why, With very thought of you,
My Heart Skips a Beat...

Why, I want to Embrace you,
Listen beating of your Heart...
The Promise that words can't make,
That We shall never Part...

Hey Can you tell me Something?
Can you Just Tell me Why??
I feel like "I am in Love" Puzzled !  :oops:
and Need Positive Reply... :D
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2007, 05:17:50 AM »
Quote from: "Shikha12"

Can you Tell me Something,
Can you Just Tell me Why...
Why it Always Feels so Difficult,
To Bid you Good Bye..??

Why, Every time when we part,
I want to hold you Tight...
Deep Inside my Heart, And
Shut Closed in my Sight...

Why, That every Rose you gave,
I forever, want to Keep...
and Each Moment My love for you,
Becomes Deep Even Deep...

Why, My Soul feels your Touch,
And I felt so very Complete...
Why, With very thought of you,
My Heart Skips a Beat...

Why, I want to Embrace you,
Listen beating of your Heart...
The Promise that words can't make,
That We shall never Part...

Hey Can you tell me Something?
Can you Just Tell me Why??
I feel like "I am in Love" Puzzled !  :oops:
and Need Positive Reply... :D
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Superrrrrrb Shikha....amazing work dear......!!!!!!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2007, 02:55:19 PM »
woowow good one Shikha!!! Very well Written!!! Good job!!
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nikki
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2007, 03:01:34 PM »
haye sadke jaon...very well written Shikha sis.
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Shikha12
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«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2007, 07:29:29 AM »
Thanks a lot Gaurav, Pooja di and Nikki.....

I was Just Trying... Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: February 17, 2007, 08:00:09 PM »
Thats a very good try !! :D Really nice...Keep it up !!!
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2007, 07:00:13 AM »
Good one shikha ji.. its touch my heart...
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2007, 08:24:02 AM »
When i walk on the Streets.....
Always Thinking abt ur words.....

And how it Love feels.....

Dancing around the Candles.....
That makes a Dream....

May be we will not be together......
But really my Love is Pure....
Like u can do faith on Holy Feels......!!!!!!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #8 on: February 21, 2007, 10:26:54 AM »
Thanks a lot... Talat, Divya and Gaurav...

Gaurav... This is just amazing, surprising and very pleasant to see you writing over here and that too... Just Superb... Usual Smile
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Tosha
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«Reply #9 on: February 26, 2007, 08:23:34 PM »
Put ur poem in The review and critic section and i'll do my job  :wink:
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Shikha12
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«Reply #10 on: March 09, 2007, 05:03:24 AM »
Sure Tosha... It would be so nice to get your valuable Comments...
You are like my Master in English Poetry and I would love to learn something from you... Usual Smile

So, I am putting my poem in Critic Section...
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sanya310
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«Reply #11 on: March 09, 2007, 06:12:36 PM »
amazing, shikha :D :D
good work gaurav.. u both definitely should write more..
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