its been so long

by no_good_stranger on November 18, 2007, 02:22:35 PM
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its been so long since i wrote
something small on a sarcastic note

you see recently i'm so filled with anger
that i avoid any form of friendly banter

and all my jokes are all R-RATED
on this here forum i will be slated

and none of these words are at all funny
its a good thing this is not where i make my money

so these simple rhymes have i created
just know buy reading this your time you've wasted

while other people suffer from writers block
i feel some one has smashed my head with a rock

so on your monitor this dribble i scribble
cos my brain may dead but my fingers not cripple
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«Reply #1 on: November 18, 2007, 07:40:22 PM »
Ok..
My reaction was...

Is there something suspicious going on Mr. NGS?
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«Reply #2 on: November 19, 2007, 08:14:55 AM »
Dunno about suspicious,just a general sense of despondentness,thanks for taking the time to read and reply,i always look forward to hearing from you
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«Reply #3 on: November 20, 2007, 04:16:31 PM »
Despondent.. that is what I was suspicious for!!
Then I read your Siggi, why feeling despondent when Birth & Death teaches us the biggest lesson !

And I am always grateful that you value my words !

Sometimes here is hunger ..
But
I donno what to feed,

Sometimes I feel to go further
But
I donno where to move,

Sometimes I just wanna be slatter
But
I dont what to be careless for,

And I always find myself onder..
But
that's beneath the truth and of life !!


Tried collecting few words together about the truth of life.. now I am in wait  for your words !

I think that was a bad try. Must not have tried getting serious in Funny Section !! isnt' ?
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«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2008, 10:14:00 AM »
Sorry dude,dunno how i missed your reply?Well maybe i was feeling down at the time,but reading this after all these months,having forgotten
how i felt at the time,and i see the words of a prankster,mocking
teasing,loaded with sarcasim,and it made me smile,and i really needed,it was in the line of a lymiric,rhyming lines that the Irish put together,just for fun.Dont think the posting is in the wrong section,but maybe Yoindia not alway's the best platform for English
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