Its Feelings.......

by Bhupinder Kaur on June 02, 2013, 05:00:26 PM
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Like a dead
I jus keep lying on bed
Remembering those unsaid words
& unread feelings
Which need to be flourished & cherished



So sweet & innocent it was....
To imagine & breathe
A beautiful life in me
Dew drops, lovely winter
Fog covering sky blue
So fresh, So alive
With freezing time
The day when I met you

A new energy,
A passionate drive
filled me high
When u smiled & looked in my eyes
A heart skipping its beat
Throat going dry,
Words jus flew away,
When u hold my hand hard
& filled me, tight in your arms
A butterfly in stomach
An sweet nectar falling drop by drop
Mind going numb,
When your lips touched mine
A very first moment
A rhythm,
A jazz,
An irresistible desire,
To have more & more
Means love, love, love
Everywhere



Now its mere past
But I sense them
In every hour
Yes it pains,
It kills
It rains, it spills
& not easy to take it
Shall I give up my life
Or shall I stay alive
To sip the bitterest
 & poisonous hatred
By being
Single & Alone
Away from the World & People
In four walls of a dark room
Where no one can ever come to meet me
& I should leave this world with jus me.......Ameen
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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2013, 07:28:14 PM »
bhupenderji,,, u wrote really amazing..
the words , the feeling, the desire reached till us ,,,,
it was awesome...n i wud say dont give just live up.
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2013, 09:25:28 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 02, 2013, 11:39:14 PM »
wonderfully expressed !
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«Reply #4 on: June 03, 2013, 12:56:30 AM »
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really very very heart touching bhupinder jee..u have expressed all ur feelings, ur thoughts, ur love, ur pain beautifully and effectively..keep writing..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: June 03, 2013, 01:46:03 AM »
Thank you all, for your valuable time & comments
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«Reply #6 on: June 03, 2013, 02:26:07 AM »
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Nice Feelings,Life Is Joyful Sister!! Ek Din Sabne Akelew Hi Jaana Hai.
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«Reply #7 on: June 03, 2013, 11:59:56 PM »
Just Speechless...Its beautiful...

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«Reply #8 on: June 04, 2013, 06:00:06 AM »
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on June 03, 2013, 02:26:07 AM
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Nice Feelings,Life Is Joyful Sister!! Ek Din Sabne Akelew Hi Jaana Hai.
thank u Veerji
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«Reply #9 on: June 04, 2013, 06:01:37 AM »
Quote from: khwahish on June 03, 2013, 11:59:56 PM
Just Speechless...Its beautiful...

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