knwn strangers

by Geetika tewari on September 05, 2012, 02:26:19 PM
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A knwn face,
in an unknwn crowd..
Searchng fr ds sm1,
in whose love she can hrslf bound..
waitin fr ds sm1 2 cum,
hr eyes desprate and gleam..
sdnly he arivs out of no whr,
and hr face lit up n beam..
Though they know ech othr,
yet they behave lik fingers(different)..
No 1 knws wats btwn dm,
bt they call themselves KNOWN STRANGERS:)
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2012, 02:29:21 PM »
gud 1.. unique hai thoda.. Usual Smile

welcome to yoindia ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2012, 02:32:44 PM »
Geetika jee
welcome
congratulations on your first post.
and believe me..it has touched my heart.
very nicely expressed. Applause Applause
enjoy the forum..
keep posting.
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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2012, 02:35:37 PM »
Bilkul sahi kaha mkv ji..

mujhe bhi ye though bahut achhi lagi..

aur kabhi ye hamare sath bhi waqkya ho chuka hai to isiliye jyada achhi lagi.. Usual Smile

beharhaal bahut bahut mubarakbaad Geetika ji..

aate hi aapne pehle hi bowl pe sixer maar diya.. tongue3

keep writing.. All The Best.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2012, 02:45:21 PM »
thanx sir Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2012, 02:54:58 PM »
very nice geetika welcome in yoindia .
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«Reply #6 on: September 06, 2012, 12:29:24 AM »
very nice
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2012, 04:01:21 AM »
good
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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2012, 01:11:59 PM »
thank u al fr ur cmnts..ur apreciation n warm wlcm wl boost me 2 write more : icon_flower: Usual Smile
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