last night [by shraddha]

by shraddha the poetess on August 30, 2013, 12:03:54 AM
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it was a beautiful night,,,
when i was looking into the skyyy...
what a beautiful sight........... Usual Smile

while walking in my street.........
i felt stars were giving me a treat...!!!
they were twinklingg on a beat..,,
a beat of my each n every feat...!!! hello2

i don't know what but suddenly a droopped tear...
showed me my fear... Feared. Feared.

a fear bcoz of that noise...,,
that whistling that horrible voice...
my heart started running fast ...and breathes were going stopped... Feared.

all the situations were going unedicuate.....,,,
i told my self that now i can't tolerate.... cussing

now a sudden change in my beautiful night...
the horrible experiance of last night...
my beautiful night..get horrible... sad11
that last night........
as now it was a horrible sight...

stars seems to me telling me to fight
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2013, 12:13:59 AM »
 :clapping:Wow wow wow wow

Great poem ....wonderful.

Keep writing.
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2013, 12:15:02 AM »
thnx bhaiya........
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2013, 12:22:06 AM »
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nicely expressed dear..very impressive..
keep up the good work..
Shads..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2013, 12:25:39 AM »
thank u bhaiya................
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2013, 12:36:30 AM »
That"s Mind blowing Creation.So Sweet.
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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2013, 12:39:16 AM »
thank u so much sir........
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2013, 01:23:12 AM »
Lovely poem! Khush rahen!
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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2013, 01:25:31 AM »
thnx akaash ji...........
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«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2013, 08:42:32 AM »
very very nice
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2013, 11:50:01 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2013, 01:44:49 PM »
beautiful poem..keep writing..
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«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2013, 06:32:20 PM »
bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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