Let’s move: to the mango-grove yonder!

by abdbundeli on June 21, 2008, 01:37:45 PM
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Let’s move: to the mango-grove yonder!

   Look, they are full blossomed, for us!
   Let’s move quickly; else be mad rush!
   Look in my eyes: you’re all in blush!
   Yes, now, your bosom swells, in gush!

Our bodies anticipate sweetly;
Cores are fusing non-discretely;
Warming blood flows fast quite up beat;
Let’s restore these moments, neatly!
   
   I’m firm; but now, you must ponder!
   Let’s move: to the mango-grove, yonder!!

   See, bees are moving, in large swarms!
   They too, are much concerned with charms!
   They’re leaving now, their blooming warms!
   Oh, who cares, for those meager harms?
Those things are changing so much, and so fast;
One may not cope with them, with paces light!
Those buds are ready for neat unheard blasts;
I don’t know, what is, after-all, your plight?

   Our bellies, bosoms, lips and palms wonder!
   Let’s move quickly: to the mango-grove yonder!!

   It’s spring; our wants are not unnatural, mind!
   Let’s be more practical, an' mutually kind!
   We have, already, consistently pined!
   See, there is some unknown glee, which will bind!

Let’s waste no more our-selves, and precious time!
See every-one is mingling midst a rhyme!
This natural, harmless instinct is no crime;
And acts in brightening life, as an enzyme!

   Let’s discover us midst spring:   the great founder!
   Let’s move quickly: to the mango-grove yonder!!

                          ••••
                                - G.R.Prakash

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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2008, 10:29:06 AM »
you are very good Mr Prakash
Keep up the good work,its just that you wont find the required appreciation at Yo,for english work that is,i hope i'm wrong thou
you deserve loads of appreciation for your creative efforts.
so keep writing
there no use fighting
pen is mightier then sword
who know in who's heart you'll strike a chord
so be strong and have faith
and continue with the good rhymes you create
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2008, 12:24:50 PM »
we often wonder of how many
moments there are in life;
should we rather not wonder
about how much life
there is in every moment
(the above lines are NOT MINE)

Dear readers!
One line, in one of my GEET (HINDI) reads:
   "Eik hi kshan mein, kadaachit, poorn jeewan jiyaa meiney!!"
For non-Hindi speaking/knowing ones I'm translating this line as below:
    'As if, I've lived the whole life in one moment!!'
I think, every person is destined to experience such a moment in his/her life! Can not we share such very special moments of our life? I hope this will provide us an opportunity to be  mutually delighted. No?
              G.R.Prakash / abd bundeli / Ramwatiya

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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: June 30, 2008, 06:11:01 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause
well said NGS Jee
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