!!Life is lonely!!

by honeyrose on February 12, 2008, 06:28:07 AM
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Life is lonely as we cross our journey.
Life is sorrows as we pass our path..
Life is full of up and downs
If life was full of joy then
Life would be full of believe and trust.

None of us is promised tomorrow
Live your life as if the last.
Life has shed so many tears..
God gave us the wisdom to know
His wisdom is far greater than gold

Life is lonely as we cross our journey..
Some time we fall apon dreams holding hands..
Because we  believed in it for thousands of years
I walked this lonely path and found none behind me..

Life has full of colours but black and white believe..
Life is lonely as we cross our journey..
Until we find come one closer to our dreams..
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Shikha12
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2008, 11:03:32 AM »
Very Nice and Very True...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2008, 11:11:16 AM »
Thank you shikha ji.. Usual Smile
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diya786
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2008, 12:26:21 PM »
nice work honey keep it up!
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mehhekkk
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2008, 05:30:19 PM »
fantastic lines,life is lke this.
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2008, 05:30:55 PM »
wowow!! nice lines Honey!!
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2008, 05:45:50 PM »
beautiful one honey...this lines are really beautiful honey..

None of us is promised tomorrow
Live your life as if the last.
Life has shed so many tears..
God gave us the wisdom to know
His wisdom is far greater than gold

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natural
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«Reply #7 on: February 13, 2008, 06:39:32 AM »

Nice one ji.. Usual Smile
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honeyrose
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«Reply #8 on: February 13, 2008, 07:02:48 AM »
beautiful one honey...this lines are really beautiful honey..

None of us is promised tomorrow
Live your life as if the last.
Life has shed so many tears..
God gave us the wisdom to know
His wisdom is far greater than gold


...

Fantastic lines khawish ji... Usual Smile
Thanks pooja,mehek diya,natural.

Life doesn't promises happiness..
Life is an empty pile of stone..
When we need something from life..
We find vanishing dreams by our side..
Life doesn't promises happiness
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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #9 on: February 13, 2008, 02:29:04 PM »
I really liked your words
good work
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Pooja
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«Reply #10 on: February 13, 2008, 04:25:06 PM »
nice lines Honey
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Roja
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«Reply #11 on: February 13, 2008, 04:28:44 PM »
beautiful one honey...this lines are really beautiful honey..

None of us is promised tomorrow
Live your life as if the last.
Life has shed so many tears..
God gave us the wisdom to know
His wisdom is far greater than gold


...

Fantastic lines khawish ji... Usual Smile
Thanks pooja,mehek diya,natural.

Life doesn't promises happiness..
Life is an empty pile of stone..
When we need something from life..
We find vanishing dreams by our side..
Life doesn't promises happiness


Well said honey...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #12 on: February 14, 2008, 07:02:58 AM »
Thanks ngood stranger ,Roja dear, and pooja

Life is filled with misery..
Life has no base its
In square shape..

Life has lots of dreams..
But none can be fulfilled..

Life gives us pleasure..
For short term happiness..

One faces the world with
hopes and dreams..

When you clearly watch
There is nothing beneath..

Life is a hope a begining
For a happy living..

My life lies on your
Hands you’re not here
Neither is my life
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no_good_stranger
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«Reply #13 on: February 14, 2008, 07:45:51 AM »
In this world of hope and fear
its only human to shed a tear
if all things were good and fare
to recognise our creator would we not care
our existence here is purely a test
with certainty it comes,our eternal rest
so be not despondent,for life is a game
free will is a blessing,your spirit life cannot tame
so enjoy and live to the max,be thankful for whats good
cherish lifes treasures,because,last forever,nothing ever could
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honeyrose
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«Reply #14 on: February 17, 2008, 07:11:00 AM »
In this world of hope and fear
its only human to shed a tear
if all things were good and fare
to recognise our creator would we not care
our existence here is purely a test
with certainty it comes,our eternal rest
so be not despondent,for life is a game
free will is a blessing,your spirit life cannot tame
so enjoy and live to the max,be thankful for whats good
cherish lifes treasures,because,last forever,nothing ever could
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Nice NGS.. Usual Smile
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