Looking myself in mirror:English

Bhupinder Kaur

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Looking myself in mirror,

I realized

A girl, reflected as lover

Having moisturized pink petals

With dash of sweetness

Mystic glance with dwelling shyness

Red apples with charming lace

A flawless face with craving grace

Silky threads with long stands

Loose band with beads of care

Fresh breeze with scent of flowers

Soft whispers with silence of hours

Beats of song with sound of waves

Pour of rain with thunder of pain

Blooming of bud with pure essence

Drawing illusions & filling presence

By single touch of yours,

Without touching my body

Simply embedding in my soul

Thro' Eyes,

Thro' Words,

Thro' Everything u do

Taking myself away from me

Making me fall again & again 4thee.

Looking myself in mirror

A girl reflected as a lover

By feeling u in me 4ever & ever.........Ameen


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Re: Looking myself in mirror

«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2013, 09:08:14 AM »

!!..BEAUTIFUL...!! love9


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F.H.SIDDIQUI

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Re: Looking myself in mirror

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@Kaash

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Re: Looking myself in mirror

«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2013, 03:10:34 PM »

This is awesome, great poetry!


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Re: Looking myself in mirror

«Reply #4 on: June 06, 2013, 03:20:38 PM »

good


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aqsh

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Re: Looking myself in mirror

«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2013, 09:00:54 PM »

simply awesome. really loved to read it. congrats.


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Looking myself in mirror

«Reply #6 on: June 08, 2013, 05:14:02 AM »

brilliant use of similes hats of to the simile uses.... I truly loved it...!! u deserve a rau for it, but unfortunately m already on shortage of rau, so just wait... n yes do keep writing maam...!!


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Bhupinder Kaur

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Re: Looking myself in mirror

«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2013, 03:36:26 AM »

Thank you all for your valuable time & comments.


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Re: Looking myself in mirror

«Reply #8 on: June 10, 2013, 06:01:02 PM »

Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on June 06, 2013, 04:37:03 AM

Beautiful As Always...


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marhoom bahayaat

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Re: Looking myself in mirror

«Reply #9 on: June 10, 2013, 06:10:42 PM »

Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on June 06, 2013, 04:37:03 AM

splendid composition with marvelous expression and fabulous narration with a rau, ma'am


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Bhupinder Kaur

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Re: Looking myself in mirror

«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2013, 12:36:14 PM »

Quote from: khwahish on June 10, 2013, 06:01:02 PM

Beautiful As Always...

Thank u K.. ji


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Bhupinder Kaur

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Re: Looking myself in mirror

«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2013, 12:37:12 PM »

Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on June 10, 2013, 06:10:42 PM

splendid composition with marvelous expression and fabulous narration with a rau, ma'am

thank you Marhoomji.....


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nashwani

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Re: Looking myself in mirror

«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2013, 09:52:08 PM »

By reading dis i found an image real instead of virtual as formed by the mirror when a normal people looks in..But a lover never looks a mirror in a normal way..ha ha just kiddin..

Btw greatly written..nicely expressed.. happy9


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jasbirsingh

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Re: Looking myself in mirror

«Reply #13 on: June 16, 2013, 10:17:11 PM »

great poetry... very beautifully written bhooopi ji..

jasbir singh
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Re: Looking myself in mirror

«Reply #14 on: August 01, 2013, 12:14:15 PM »

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